Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 응답은 질문에 직접 답하고 이유를 제시한 점은 좋습니다. 다만 문법(관사, 단수/복수), 어순과 반복 표현을 고쳐 더 자연스럽게 말하세요. 예를 들어 'there's so many'는 잘못된 축약이고 'Seoul is very busy city'는 관사가 빠졌습니다. 또한 한두 문장으로 간결하게 정리하고 연결어(for example, because)를 적절히 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

예시: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in Seoul, which is a very busy city. As a result, the skyline is full of office towers and apartment blocks.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 중간에 망설임이 많아 의미 전달이 약합니다. 먼저 간단한 주제 문장으로 대답하고 이유를 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 표현(MMM, so.)을 제거하고 'there are'처럼 문장이 완성되지 않은 부분을 고치세요. 예시나 대체 활동을 제시하면 대화가 풍부해집니다.

예시: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because most nearby structures are plain office blocks and not very attractive. Instead, I prefer taking photos of parks or street scenes when I go out.

제안: 답변에 건물 이름을 말한 것은 좋지만, 방문 이유와 건물의 특징을 명확하고 구체적으로 설명해야 합니다. 단어 선택 오류(ingredient, theorem 등 부적절한 단어)와 불필요한 망설임을 줄이세요. 구조는 주제문 + 이유(구체적 예시) + 짧은 결론으로 구성하세요.

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit Techno Mart because it's a large electronics and hobby mall. It has many shops selling gadgets, gaming accessories, and even small cafes, so I could spend several hours exploring.

제안: 의견은 분명하지만 표현이 다소 어색합니다. 'live in a tall building' 앞에 관사를 추가하고 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하세요. 'play and dance in my house free'는 자연스럽게 'have more space and freedom at home'처럼 바꿔 말하면 좋습니다. 한두 문장으로 간결하게 마무리하세요.

예시: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I prefer a low-rise house with more open space. That way I can play music and dance freely without disturbing neighbours.

× Yes, near my house there's so many tall buildings because I live in Seoul.

✓ Yes, near my house there are so many tall buildings because I live in Seoul.

'There is' is singular; 'so many tall buildings' is plural, so 'there are' must be used for agreement. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns.

× Seoul is very busy city in Korea, so there's so many tall buildings.

✓ Seoul is a very busy city in Korea, so there are so many tall buildings.

Missing article before 'very busy city' and incorrect 'there's' for plural. Use 'a' for singular countable noun and 'there are' for plural. Suggestion: insert 'a' and match 'there are' to plural noun.

× No, I don't take photos of the buildings because there are.

✓ No, I don't take photos of the buildings because there aren't any.

Original ends with incomplete clause 'because there are.' Needs negative form 'there aren't any' to express absence. Use correct negative contraction and 'any' with plural countables. Suggestion: use 'there aren't any' or 'there aren't' plus noun.

× Usually office buildings, so. MMM, not pretty, so I don't.

✓ They are usually office buildings, so they're not pretty, and I don't take photos of them.

Original is fragmented and lacks clear subject and verb. Combine into full sentence: subject 'they' (buildings), verb 'are', and clarify object 'them'. Suggestion: avoid fragments; use complete clauses.

× Yeah, that building's name is Techno Mart. So there are many ingredient to play, for example, uh, theorem or drug shop or.

✓ Yeah, the building's name is Techno Mart. There are many places to visit inside, for example, a supermarket or drug store.

Problems: article 'the' for specific building, 'there are' is okay but 'many ingredient to play' is wrong word choice and countability; 'ingredient' is incorrect. Also 'theorem' is wrong. Use 'places' and countable nouns with articles. Suggestion: say 'There are many places to visit, for example, a supermarket or a drug store.'

× No, I don't want to live in tall building because I want to play and dance in my house free so I want to stay low building.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I want to be free to play and dance in my house, so I want to live in a low-rise building.

Missing article 'a' before 'tall building'; awkward phrasing 'play and dance in my house free' needs 'be free to play and dance'; 'stay low building' is incorrect — use 'live in a low-rise building'. Suggestion: use articles and natural adjective forms like 'low-rise' and the infinitive 'to be free to'.