Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, dùng ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác, giảm tiếng ồn (uh, um) và sắp xếp ý theo trật tự: mô tả, ví dụ. Nên dùng một hoặc hai câu hỗ trợ cụ thể về số lượng/loại tòa nhà và thói quen tham quan.

예시: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home in Ho Chi Minh City. For example, there are several high-rise office towers and apartment blocks within a ten-minute walk, and I often go out with my friends to walk around and admire the architecture.

제안: Cần câu trả lời trực tiếp, tránh phát ngôn lặp và những từ ngắt quãng. Nên nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao chụp (ví dụ: kiến trúc, ánh sáng) và đưa ví dụ rõ ràng về một tòa nhà đã chụp.

예시: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I like interesting architecture and lighting. For instance, when I first visited Ho Chi Minh City I took many photos of the Bitexco Tower because its shape and nighttime lights were striking.

제안: Cần nêu tên tòa nhà (chính xác), giải thích ngắn lý do cụ thể để thuyết phục (lịch sử, kiến trúc, ý nghĩa), và dùng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Tránh mơ hồ và lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ 'symbol', 'wealthy' không rõ nghĩa ở đây).

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it is an iconic skyscraper with impressive architecture. I want to see the observation deck and learn more about its design and the views of the city.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp và diễn đạt lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: view, tiện nghi, an ninh). Sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'can gives' và từ sai chính tả. Thêm một câu phụ giải thích ngắn về lợi và nhược điểm nếu cần.

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would offer a great view of the city and modern facilities like a gym and security. However, I might miss having a garden or a backyard, which is one disadvantage.

× Uh Oh yes, I'm living in Ho Chi Minh City so I always saw a strong building beside me and I often go sightseeing is whenever I free outside the parent, uh, go with my friends.

✓ Uh, yes. I live in Ho Chi Minh City, so I always see many tall buildings near me, and I often go sightseeing with my friends when I am free.

The student mixed present continuous and past simple incorrectly and used awkward phrases. Use simple present for habitual actions (I live, I see, I often go). 'Saw' is past tense and should be 'see'. 'Strong building' is incorrect collocation; use 'tall buildings'. 'Whenever I free outside the parent' is ungrammatical; correct to 'when I am free' and specify 'with my friends'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and choose correct nouns and prepositional phrases.

× Yes, of course, I prefer to take photo of many things. There's issue, uh, beautiful or umm, uh, strange. So when I first come to Ho Chi Minh City, La Matamor, uh, also, uh, building a tip.

✓ Yes, of course. I prefer to take photos of many things. Some are beautiful and some are unusual. When I first came to Ho Chi Minh City, La Matamor was also an interesting building to me.

Errors include missing plural 'photos' (article/number), awkward phrases and tense. Use plural for general objects (photos). 'There's issue' is wrong; use 'Some are...' to refer to photos. Use simple past 'came' for a past arrival. 'Building a tip' is not English; interpret as 'an interesting building to me'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms, appropriate adjectives, and past tense for past events.

× Yes, I on way have a dream of visiting LA March 81 because it is one of the famous symbol of Vietnam and it is, uh, usually suitable for the risk of the wealthy. So is it the purpose of my life?

✓ Yes, I have always had a dream of visiting La March 81 because it is one of the famous symbols of Vietnam and it is usually associated with wealthy people. It is one of my life goals.

Sentence structure is fragmented and many collocations are incorrect. 'On way have a dream' should be 'have always had a dream'. 'LA March 81' likely a name; keep capitalization 'La March 81'. 'Famous symbol' needs plural 'symbols' for one of many. 'Suitable for the risk of the wealthy' is nonsensical; likely 'associated with wealthy people'. 'So is it the purpose of my life?' is awkward; change to 'It is one of my life goals.' Suggestion: reorder phrases, use correct idioms (have a dream, associated with), and choose clear expressions for goals.

× Yes, of course, living in a tour meeting can gives me a view of seeing people unders and I want to uh, what's go sightseeing around and can, uh, enjoy the beauty of on the city. MMM.

✓ Yes, of course. Living in a tall building can give me a view of the people below, and I would be able to go sightseeing around and enjoy the beauty of the city.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and gerunds. 'Can gives' should be 'can give' (modal + base verb). 'View of seeing people unders' is ungrammatical; use 'view of the people below'. 'What's go sightseeing' is wrong; use 'be able to go sightseeing' or 'go sightseeing'. 'Beauty of on the city' should be 'beauty of the city'. Suggestion: after modal verbs use base verb, use correct noun phrases for spatial relations (people below), and use 'enjoy the beauty of the city'.