Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要直接、句子更准确，并避免重复和多余填充词。改用一到两句清晰的陈述，注意单复数和语序，可补充一两个具体例子以丰富内容。比如先直接回答“是”或“不是”，然后用连接词展开细节。

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in a big city. For example, there are office towers and large shopping malls within a five-minute walk, which make the area feel very busy and modern.

제안: 注意时态和语法错误，减少犹豫词（umm、uh）。把信息组织为一至两句，使用连接词如“because”或“for example”，并具体说明拍摄对象或用途（比如风格、目的、常用平台）。

예시: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel to a new city because I like capturing different architectural styles. For example, I take pictures of both historic temples and modern skyscrapers and usually share the best ones on Instagram.

제안: 回答要完整、连贯，避免不完整的句子和数字错误。先说出一个明确的建筑名称，然后用一两句话说明原因和你期待的体验，使用连接词如“because”或“because of”。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Jing'an Temple in Shanghai because it is a famous historic site with a long history. I want to explore the temple architecture and experience the local religious and cultural atmosphere.

제안: 回答要更简洁并纠正语法问题（主谓一致、代词使用）。用一到两句给出原因，并可补充具体便利性或缺点以显示更全面的观点。避免重复“because”。

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers great views of the city and is usually very convenient for shopping and commuting. However, I might be concerned about noise and limited outdoor space.

× Is there a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in a big city?

✓ Are there a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in a big city?

句子开头使用了 there be 结构，但后面主语是复数（a lot of tall buildings），因此谓语应为复数形式 are 而不是 is。建议根据主语单复数选择 there is / there are。

× Yes I do umm, when I travel to a new city, I always take a beautiful and interesting buildings on both old and new ones.

✓ Yes I do. When I travel to a new city, I always take photos of beautiful and interesting buildings, both old and new.

原句中有多处问题：1) 使用了不定冠词 a 修饰复数名词 buildings，应该去掉或改为 plural without a；2) 动词短语不完整，应使用 take photos of；3) 结构“on both old and new ones”不自然，改为 both old and new。建议在描述复数名词时不要使用 a，使用 take photos of 来表达“拍……的照片”。

× Umm, I always uh, shooted these photos on the social media.

✓ Umm, I always, uh, upload/shot these photos to social media.

动词 shoot 的过去式是 shot 而不是 shooted；但句子前有 always 表示习惯性现在时，宜用现在时如 upload/post 或用过去式 shot 若强调过去某次拍照。另用法上应说 upload/post to social media 而不是 on the social media。建议根据想表达的时间选择正确时态与动词：I always post these photos to social media 或 I shot these photos when I traveled。

× Yes there are. I would like 2. Jingan Temple is located in the Shanghai city, is very famous place and has a long history.

✓ Yes, there is. I would like to visit Jing'an Temple. Jing'an Temple is located in Shanghai; it is a very famous place and has a long history.

1) 回答前一个问题 'Is there a building that you would like to visit?' 应使用单数 there is 而非 there are；2) 地名前不需要定冠词 the（the Shanghai city 不正确），应为 in Shanghai；3) 缺少动词和连贯的句子结构，第二句需要主语和谓语（it is）；4) 句子拼写和标点需调整。建议把想表达的完整句子写清楚：I would like to visit Jing'an Temple. It is located in Shanghai and has a long history。

× I want to feel local culture and.

✓ I want to experience the local culture.

原句 'feel local culture and.' 结构不完整，且动词 feel 后接抽象名词不如 experience 更自然。句尾多余的 and 使句子残缺。建议使用完整句子并选择合适动词：experience the local culture。

× Yes I do, because umm we have a great view of the city and also is really convenient because tall building are often in the city center.

✓ Yes I do, because we have a great view of the city and it is really convenient since tall buildings are often in the city centre.

句中有多处主谓不一致和单复数错误：1) 在并列句中第二个部分需要明确主语 it（it is really convenient）；2) tall building 应为复数 tall buildings，与谓语 are 一致；3) city center 拼写/用法注意 centre/center，但关键是主谓一致和补全主语。建议检查每个分句是否有主语与谓语一致，复数名词与复数谓语配对。