Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (chủ-động từ: have → has, số ít/ số nhiều), phát âm và loại bỏ tiếng ấp úng (uh, umm). Trả lời nên rõ ràng, ngắn gọn với câu chủ đề đầu tiên, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tên tòa nhà hoặc khoảng cách). Dùng liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc (for example, such as).

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I live in the city centre, so there are modern apartment blocks and a large shopping mall just two minutes away from my flat.

제안: Cải thiện cấu trúc phủ định và động từ nguyên mẫu (like to take photos), tránh lặp từ và câu không rõ nghĩa. Nên nêu câu chủ đề rồi giải thích lý do với 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: cảnh thiên nhiên, màu sắc, cảm xúc). Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để kết nối ý.

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I prefer landscapes. I find natural scenes more colorful and emotionally appealing, so I often photograph parks, rivers and mountains instead.

제안: Cải thiện rõ ràng câu trả lời: nêu tên hoặc kiểu tòa nhà cụ thể (ví dụ: a famous skyscraper), dùng thì đúng (would like / want to visit) và tránh ấp úng. Thêm lý do rõ ràng và một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: view from the top, architecture). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu ngắn gọn.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a famous skyscraper such as the Burj Khalifa. I want to see the city from the observation deck and admire the modern architecture and the views over the skyline.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (live in a tall building; cannot see → can see), tránh từ sai (towing, aural). Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rồi lý do cụ thể (views, convenience, noise). Dùng ví dụ ngắn về tiện ích hoặc cảm giác để tăng tính thuyết phục.

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I can enjoy amazing views of the city. Living high up also feels peaceful and I would appreciate having good facilities like a gym and a rooftop garden.

× I live in the city center which have many tall buildings such as shopping mall and uh, modern apartment.

✓ I live in the city center, which has many tall buildings such as shopping malls and modern apartments.

'which' refers to 'the city center' (singular), so the verb must be 'has' not 'have' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'shopping mall' and 'modern apartment' need plural forms to match 'many' and general reference: use 'shopping malls' and 'modern apartments'. Suggestion: identify the singular subject and use singular verb; use plural nouns after 'many'.

× Uh, so umm, in my ho in near my house we have very tall building.

✓ Uh, so umm, in my house near my home we have very tall buildings.

The original uses 'building' (singular) with 'we have', implying multiple; also 'ho in near my house' is unclear and should be 'in my house near my home' or simply 'near my house'. Use plural 'buildings' to match context. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches intended meaning and simplify location phrase.

× No, I don't really like take photo of the building because I like take photo the landscape.

✓ No, I don't really like taking photos of buildings because I like taking photos of landscapes.

After 'like' when used with 'do' negative ('don't like'), the verb should be in '-ing' form: 'like taking'. Also pluralize 'photo(s)' and use 'of' before 'landscapes'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'like' and correct preposition and plural forms.

× I think this more feeling beautiful and interest more than tall building because I think it's very simply and no.

✓ I think they feel more beautiful and more interesting than tall buildings because I think they're very simple.

Use adjective forms 'beautiful' and 'interesting' to describe 'they' (landscapes). 'Feel' is better than 'feeling' here; 'more' should modify adjectives 'more beautiful' and 'more interesting'. 'Tall building' should be plural 'tall buildings'. 'Very simply' is incorrect; use adjective 'simple' or 'very simple'. Suggestion: match word forms (adjectives vs adverbs), use correct plurality and clearer sentence structure.

× I thinks, uh, I'll want to be this on nothing more building once on my life because I hope that is very tall, uh sky, like, you know, it's very beautiful.

✓ I think I'll want to visit this building once in my life because I hope it is very tall and has a beautiful view of the sky.

Use 'I think' not 'I thinks' (subject 'I' requires base form 'think'). 'I'll want to be this on nothing more building' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I'll want to visit this building'. Use 'once in my life' not 'once on my life'. 'I hope that is' should be 'I hope it is' (use pronoun 'it' for the building). Suggestion: use correct verb form for 'I', simplify phrase to 'visit this building', and use standard idioms 'once in my life'.

× Uh, I want to uh, uh, stand on here.

✓ Uh, I want to stand here.

'Stand on here' is incorrect collocation; 'stand here' or 'stand on the observation deck' is better. No third-person issue in 'I want' but original extra fillers and preposition are wrong. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'on' and reduce fillers.

× Yes, I think it's very interesting uh because live in a towing uh, I can't uh see the aural landscape uh in the city and I uh like fly in the sky.

✓ Yes, I think it's very interesting because living in a tall building I can see the overall city landscape and I would feel like I am flying in the sky.

After 'because' use a gerund clause 'living in a tall building' or full clause 'because I live in a tall building'. 'Towing' is incorrect; use 'tall building'. 'I can't see the aural landscape' likely intended 'overall' or 'entire'. Use present ability 'I can see' rather than 'can't'. Also 'like fly in the sky' should be 'would feel like I am flying in the sky' for intended meaning. Suggestion: choose correct words ('tall', 'overall'), use gerund or full clause and correct modal/tense to express feeling.

× Umm. I really like live in the.

✓ Umm. I would really like to live in one.

Original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'in the'. Use 'live in one' to refer to a tall building or 'live in a tall building'. Also 'like live' should be 'like to live' or 'would like to live'. Suggestion: complete the sentence, use 'would like to' for preference statements and provide the noun phrase.