Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需要更自然和简洁，避免语法和重复错误（如“its economic”、“this modern building buildings”）。开头可直接陈述观点，随后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意句子数量不超过五句，使用恰当的连接词。

예시: Yes. I live in Changsha, which has grown rapidly, so there are many towering skyscrapers near my home. The skyline looks impressive, and the modern buildings give the city a lively, cosmopolitan atmosphere.

제안: 内容表达不清且有语法错误（如“my CD”，“especially as lights”），句子不连贯。回答时应先简单直接回答，然后用一到两句具体说明拍摄频率、场景或原因，并用连接词衔接。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially at night. The city skyline is very colorful because of the modern skyscrapers, and I enjoy capturing the lights and reflections on the glass façades.

제안: 回答总体不错，但有小错误和语气可更自然（如“I will like”应为“I would like”或“I'd like”）。可再加一处具体细节说明为何感兴趣或计划何时去。保持简洁并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit the IFS, a magnificent modern skyscraper in my city. It's a symbol of our economic development, and I'm curious to see the panoramic view from the top, especially at sunset when the city lights begin to twinkle.

제안: 回答清楚且有支持细节，但可更自然地衔接观点与例子，避免生硬的列举。可以补一句替代选择（例如更喜欢哪种住房），让回答更完整。

예시: No, not really. While skyscrapers are impressive, I find they often lack privacy and can be inconvenient. For example, you might wait a long time for the elevator during peak hours, and it can be difficult to move heavy luggage — I prefer a low-rise apartment with easier access.

× I live in Changsha and its economic has been growing rapidly, so there are mainly towering skyscrapers near my home.

✓ I live in Changsha and its economy has been growing rapidly, so there are mainly towering skyscrapers near my home.

句中使用了名词“economic”但应使用名词“economy”来表示“经济”。这是词类错误，不在定冠词范围内，但根据给定列表中最接近的问题编号应归于名词/词类使用（这里选择17）。建议：记住常见搭配——表示“经济”用economy，而economic通常作形容词，例如“economic growth（经济增长）”。

× The skyline looks impressive and this modern building buildings make the city feel very lively.

✓ The skyline looks impressive, and these modern buildings make the city feel very lively.

原句中“this modern building buildings”出现重复且指示代词和名词单复数不一致，造成结构混乱。应使用复数指示代词“these”和复数名词“buildings”。建议：注意指示代词（this/these）要与后接名词的单复数一致，避免重复单词。

× Yes, definitely. I took lots of photos of my CD, especially as lights.

✓ Yes, definitely. I took lots of photos of my city, especially at night when the lights were on.

原句有多处错误：'CD'显然为拼写/单词错误，应为'city'；短语“especially as lights”不合语法，故改为“especially at night when the lights were on”以符合过去时的叙述。建议：检查单词拼写并用合适的时间短语表达过去发生的拍照行为（使用过去时与时间状语一致）。

× The skyline is colorful because of such towering modern buildings and.

✓ The skyline is colorful because of such towering modern buildings.

原句末尾多了连词“and”导致句子残缺。应删去多余的“and”或补全并列结构。建议：写句子时检查句子是否完整，避免句尾留下未完成的连词。

× Yes, I will like to visit IFS, A magnificent modern skyscraper in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit IFS, a magnificent modern skyscraper in my city.

原句中“will like”用法不当，应使用礼貌或愿望表达“would like”。另外逗号后不应大写“A”。建议：用于表达愿望或意愿常用“would like to do”；注意大小写规范，标点后小写字母开头。

× Although the impressive skyscrapers attract a lot of people, I reckon the tall buildings lack of privacy and can be inconvenient.

✓ Although the impressive skyscrapers attract a lot of people, I reckon tall buildings lack privacy and can be inconvenient.

原句中“lack of privacy”搭配错误，动词“lack”后直接接名词，不加介词“of”。此外“the tall buildings”在此泛指高楼，去掉定冠词更自然。建议：记住固定搭配“lack + 名词（lack privacy）”，表示缺乏时不加“of”；泛指一类事物时可省略冠词或用复数形式。