Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子有语法和用词错误，表达不够简洁自然。应直接回答后用一到两句具体细节支撑，并注意单复数和时态。可去掉冗余词，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in a newly developed area. Many of them are modern office towers with glass facades, and a few residential high-rises overlook a large park nearby.

제안: 回答意思能理解但语言混乱，出现不自然表达（如“subconsciously”不合适）、语法错误和冗长句。建议用明确原因和具体例子支持，避免模糊词并注意句子结构。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially historic ones like the Forbidden City. I photograph them to capture architectural details and to remember how people lived in the past.

제안: 回答重复且有多处语法和词汇错误（如 allow→allows、image→imagine，‘belongs with the past time’不自然）。建议先直接回答，再给具体理由和一两个细节，用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Forbidden City because it allows me to imagine how people lived centuries ago. Walking around its red walls and courtyards would give me a real sense of history and cultural heritage.

제안: 回答含有口头语填充词（uh）和用词重复（transports和transport）。建议直接陈述立场，然后用一两条具体理由支持，使用更自然的词汇并避免填充词。

예시: Yes, I would consider living in a tall building because they are often located in modern neighbourhoods with good public transport links and plenty of nearby shops and restaurants.

× Absolutely, there are various skyscraper near my home because I live in a modern area where established some beautiful and stylish skyscrapers.

✓ Absolutely, there are various skyscrapers near my home because I live in a modern area where some beautiful and stylish skyscrapers were established.

问题类型：可数名词单复数错误。句中用的是复数指示词 "various"，名词应为复数 "skyscrapers" 而不是单数 "skyscraper"；此外从句“where established some...”语序和语态不正确，需改为被动或加主语："where some... were established"。建议注意可数名词与修饰词（如 various）的数一致，并确保从句有主语或使用被动语态。

× Yes, I often subconsciously take photos of buildings, especially the historical buildings such as the Forbidden City.

✓ Yes, I often subconsciously take photos of buildings, especially historical buildings such as the Forbidden City.

问题类型：动词的 -ing 形式/冗余定语。原句中“the historical buildings such as the Forbidden City”中“the”并非必须，且“such as”后直接用名词短语更自然。此处主要是定冠词使用问题（也归于 -ing 规则无关），建议去掉多余定冠词或保持一致性：general category 用无冠词或复数形式。

× Every time when I visit this kind of historical buildings, I want to take photo to know how the ancient people to live in the past which both.

✓ Every time I visit these kinds of historical buildings, I want to take photos to know how ancient people lived in the past.

问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式与时态错误。问题包括：1) "this kind of" 应与复数搭配为 "these kinds of" 或改为 "this kind of building"；2) "take photo" 应为可数复数 "take photos"；3) 不定式和从句语序混乱，"to know how the ancient people to live" 应为过去时 "how ancient people lived"；4) 句尾多余词 "which both" 无意义，应删除。建议理清主从句结构，匹配单复数和时态。

× Yes, I'd like to visit Forbidden City because it allow me to image how the ancient people live, which boasts a strong sense of connection and belongs with the past time.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit the Forbidden City because it allows me to imagine how ancient people lived, and it gives me a strong sense of connection with the past.

问题类型：情态动词/动词形式与介词搭配错误。问题包含：1) 缺少定冠词，应为 "the Forbidden City"；2) 主语为单数建筑物，动词应为第三人称单数 "allows"（相关于第三人单数问题）；3) "image" 应为动词 "imagine"；4) 时态应为过去时 "lived"；5) 短语 "belongs with the past time" 不自然，改为 "gives me a strong sense of connection with the past"。建议注意第三人称单数动词形式、正确动词选择及固定搭配（connection with）。

× Every time when I walk around the red wall in the Forbidden City, I can image.

✓ Every time I walk around the red walls in the Forbidden City, I can imagine.

问题类型：第三人称单数/动词形式错误与名词单复数。问题在于动词 "image" 用错，应为 "imagine"；此外常说 "red walls"（复数）更自然；"Every time when" 冗余，建议用 "Every time" 或 "When"。建议学习常用动词的正确拼写和固定表达。

× Yes, I believe many young people prefer high rise apartments since they are usually in modern communities, which means it uh, supports uh, convenient transport, transports and among shopping malls.

✓ Yes, I believe many young people prefer high-rise apartments since they are usually in modern communities, which means they offer convenient transportation and are near shopping malls.

问题类型：形容词/副词和词形错误。错误包括：1) 复合形容词应为 "high-rise"；2) 结构 "which means it... supports" 主语不明确，应为 "which means they offer"；3) "convenient transport, transports" 重复且词形不当，应为不可数名词 "transportation" 或 "transport"；4) "among shopping malls" 用词不当，改为 "near shopping malls"。建议注意复合形容词连字符、主语一致和常用搭配（offer transportation / near shopping malls）。