Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap net ve anlaşılır ancak birkaç dilbilgisi hatası ve tekrar var. Cümle yapılarını düzeltin (örn. 'I live in a small village'), zaman uyumunu kontrol edin (present tense tutarlı olsun) ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca linking words ile cümleleri daha akıcı bağlayın (e.g. 'because' yerine 'as' veya 'so'). Daha spesifik detay ekleyin: kaç katlı bina yok, en yakın şehirde yüksek binalar var mı gibi.

예시: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small village where most people live in detached houses, so there are no high-rise or apartment blocks nearby. As a result, the skyline is quite low and the nearest tall buildings are in the city about 30 minutes away.

제안: İyi fikir ve net cevap; ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime uyumu sorunları var (örn. 'a landscape photos' yanlış). Cümleleri maksimum 3-4 kısa cümleyle tutun, bağlaç kullanın ('because', 'so', 'however') ve daha spesifik örnekler verin (hangi manzaraları, hangi durumlarda insanları çektiğinizi belirtin).

예시: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking landscape photos and candid pictures of people because I enjoy capturing natural scenery and human emotions. For example, I often photograph sunsets by the river and street scenes during local festivals.

제안: Cevap anlamlı ama düzensiz ve tekrarlar fazla. Resmi sınav diline uygun olarak 'Yeah' yerine 'Yes' kullanın, cümleleri net bir topic sentence ve destekleyici cümleyle yapılandırın. Tekrarları çıkarın ve örnekleri netleştirin (örn. hangi cami veya kilise, neden ilginizi çekiyor). Ayrıca zaman uyumu ve sözdizimi hatalarını düzeltin.

예시: Yes, there are several types of buildings I'd like to visit. For example, I would like to visit historic mosques and churches to learn about their architecture and history, and I also enjoy visiting my family's house because it feels familiar and comfortable.

제안: İyi fikirler ama dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hataları var ('a low rise houses' yanlış, 'high rise blue' anlamsız). Cümleleri daha kısa ve tutarlı kurun, bağlantı ifadeleri kullanın ve somut örnekler verin (örn. bahçeli bir ev, komşularla ilişkiler). Ayrıca 'safer' neden olduğunu biraz daha açıklayın.

예시: I would prefer to live in a low-rise house rather than a tall building because I feel safer and more at home. For example, living close to the street and having a small garden makes it easier to meet neighbors and watch over my home, which is harder in a high-rise block.

× No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in small village where most people live in detached houses, so there were no high rise or apartment buildings nearby.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small village where most people live in detached houses, so there are no high-rise or apartment buildings nearby.

The first clause is fine. 'small village' needs the indefinite article 'a' because singular countable nouns require an article. 'were no' incorrectly uses past tense; the context is present, so use 'are no'. 'high rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' when used as a compound adjective or noun. Also 'apartment buildings nearby' is acceptable once present tense is used. Suggestions: Add 'a' before 'small village'; change 'were' to 'are' to match present context; hyphenate 'high-rise'.

× No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking a landscape photos and candid pictures of people because I like capturing natural scenery and human emotions.

✓ No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking landscape photos and candid pictures of people because I like capturing natural scenery and human emotions.

After 'prefer', using the gerund 'taking' is fine, but 'a landscape photos' is incorrect because 'a' with plural 'photos' is ungrammatical. Remove 'a' and use plural 'landscape photos'. Suggestions: Remove the extra article 'a' before 'landscape photos'; keep the gerund 'taking' or use 'to take' consistently (e.g., 'I prefer to take landscape photos').

× Yeah, too many buildings I love to visit, for example, mosque, church and sometimes to my family's home because I feel like we're familiar when I visit, visit to my family.

✓ Yeah, there are many buildings I would love to visit, for example, mosques and churches, and sometimes I visit my family's home because I feel comfortable and familiar when I visit them.

The original sentence has several structure problems: word order ('too many buildings I love to visit' is awkward), missing articles/plural forms ('mosque, church' should be 'mosques and churches'), inappropriate 'to' before 'my family's home' when expressing visiting, and the phrase 'we're familiar' is unclear; likely intended 'I feel familiar' or 'I feel comfortable and familiar when I visit them'. Also repeated 'visit' is redundant. Suggestions: Reorder to 'there are many buildings I would love to visit'; use plural nouns for general examples; use 'I visit my family's home' for habitual action and 'feel comfortable' for clearer meaning; remove duplicate 'visit'.

× I prefer living in a low rise houses rather than in a tall building because I feel safer and more at home. For example, I like being closer to the street and knowing my neighbors, which is harder in our high rise blue.

✓ I prefer living in low-rise houses rather than in a tall building because I feel safer and more at home. For example, I like being closer to the street and knowing my neighbors, which is harder in a high-rise building.

'a low rise houses' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'houses'; remove the article or change to singular. 'low-rise' should be hyphenated. 'high rise blue' is likely a typo; 'blue' should be 'block' or 'building'. Also 'in our high rise' is unclear—use 'in a high-rise building' for general comparison. Suggestions: Use consistent number and articles ('living in low-rise houses' or 'living in a low-rise house'); hyphenate compounds; replace 'blue' with the intended noun 'building' or 'block' and ensure determiners are correct.