Building— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there tall buildings near your home?
수험생
No, my home is in a very small city named Bernala, which is in Punjab. It is a, uh, very small city and it doesn't have a many, uh, skycrapers, but uh, it have like, uh, small buildings.
시험관
Do you take photos of buildings?
수험생
Yes, I like taking photos of buildings, especially, uh, those which are very high rise as there are many different, uh, type of building in my city, uh, which are made with different, uh, styles, different designs and, uh, shapes.
시험관
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
수험생
Yes, I would like to visit a very fascinating building which is located in Dubai and that is Burj Khalifa. I have heard a lot about that building and also I feel very fascinated when I watch people on social media giving reviews of Burj Khalifa. So I would like to visit there.
시험관
Do you want to live in a tall building?
수험생
Umm, I don't like living in very high rise buildings. Umm, I like my own home where I live as it is, uh, in a ground place and I uh, don't have to feel, uh, uh, very, I don't have to put very much efforts in going above and down here and there. I just need to go out of my gate and get.
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총점
Part 1
Are there tall buildings near your home?
점수: 62.0제안: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use linking words and correct verb forms (e.g., 'there aren't many skyscrapers' and 'it has small buildings'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.
예시: No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home. Bernala is a small city in Punjab, so most structures are low-rise houses and small apartment blocks.
Do you take photos of buildings?
점수: 70.0제안: Make your answer clearer and more fluent by reducing repetition and fillers. Give one or two specific reasons why you like photographing tall buildings and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.
예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially high-rise ones, because they have varied architectural styles and interesting shapes. For example, I often capture contrasting facades and unique rooflines in my city.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
점수: 76.0제안: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason with a specific detail. Avoid repeating 'fascinated' and unnecessary background. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and keep to 2–3 sentences.
예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and its observation deck offers stunning city views. I have seen many reviews and photos online that make me want to experience it in person.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
점수: 60.0제안: Answer directly and use correct phrasing. Replace fillers and unclear fragments with a concise reason and a brief specific example. Use linking words like 'because' and keep to 2–3 sentences.
예시: No, I wouldn't like to live in a very tall building because I prefer a ground-floor house for convenience. For instance, living on the ground floor means I don't have to use stairs or waiting for elevators to go outside.
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