Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
수험생
Uh, air airlines traveling by car because I don't like with.
시험관
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
수험생
Uh, yes, I like taking photo of the secondary outside because of I often I often buy car.
시험관
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
수험생
I love the sea because I live in the beach.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
점수: 34.0제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp; cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề, thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ và tránh tiếng ì/âm ỳ. Hãy sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I prefer travelling by car because I like looking out of the window') và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể (ví dụ: bạn thích thư giãn, ngắm cảnh, hoặc đọc biển hiệu).
예시: I usually look out of the window when I travel by car because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, I like seeing countryside fields and small villages, which helps me relax during the journey.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
점수: 28.0제안: Câu trả lời lặp từ, nhiều lỗi câu và thiếu nội dung cụ thể. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu lí do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Tránh lặp từ như 'I often' hai lần; sửa cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside because...').
예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember interesting places. For instance, last month I photographed a beautiful mountain view while driving to my hometown.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
점수: 62.0제안: Câu trả lời ngắn, nhưng rõ ràng. Để tốt hơn, giữ câu chủ đề và mở rộng bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (lý do, hoạt động bạn làm ở biển) và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác (ví dụ: 'I live near the beach' thay vì 'in the beach').
예시: I prefer the sea because I live near the beach and enjoy swimming and watching sunsets. For example, I often go for evening walks along the shore, which helps me relax after a busy day.
문법
× Uh, air airlines traveling by car because I don't like with.
✓ Uh, I prefer traveling by car because I don't like flying.
Original sentence uses incorrect words and pronouns ('air airlines' and 'with') and lacks subject clarity. The student likely meant to contrast flying and driving. Use 'I prefer' to express preference and 'flying' as the gerund for the activity of air travel. Use 'because I don't like flying' to give a reason. Suggestion: practice using 'prefer + -ing' and gerunds for activities.
× Uh, yes, I like taking photo of the secondary outside because of I often I often buy car.
✓ Uh, yes, I like taking photos of the scenery outside because I often travel by car.
Errors: 'taking photo' should be plural 'taking photos' or 'taking a photo'; 'secondary' is incorrect word, should be 'scenery'; 'because of I often I often buy car' is ungrammatical. Use 'because I often travel by car' to explain reason. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for hobbies, use correct nouns ('scenery'), and use simple present 'I often travel' to describe habitual actions.
× I love the sea because I live in the beach.
✓ I love the sea because I live on the beach.
Use 'live on the beach' not 'in the beach' because fixed expressions with 'beach' take 'on' to indicate location at the shoreline. Also 'the sea' is fine if referring generally. Suggestion: learn common preposition collocations like 'on the beach', 'in the city', 'at the station'.
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