Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、结构更清晰并避免重复。先给出一个主题句，然后用1–2句具体细节支持，使用连接词使句子连贯，注意语法和词序，例如不要把副词放在句子结尾重复出现。可以补充为什么喜欢拍照或分享的原因以增加内容深度。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window because I find the changing landscape relaxing. For example, I like photographing bright skies and colorful scenes, and I often upload the best shots to social media to share with friends.

제안: 回答时注意时态一致和语法完整，并给出具体原因或例子。避免不完整或不连贯的句子（如“improve our. Fuelling”）。使用连词解释为什么分享照片很重要，并说明与谁分享和带来的结果。

예시: Yes, I often take photos and share them with my friends because sharing pictures helps us stay connected and talk about our trips. For instance, we comment on each other’s photos and plan future outings based on what we liked.

제안: 回答应直接明确偏好，然后用1–2句具体理由支持。注意句子结构和用词（例如‘I don’t like hiking’而不是‘I’m not like to go hiking’），避免重复和含糊的表达。可以比较两者并给出个人经历或情景作为例子。

예시: I prefer the sea because I enjoy relaxing on the beach rather than hiking. For example, I like sunny afternoons by the coast where I can swim and read, while mountain trips usually involve tiring walks which I don’t enjoy.

× Yes, I always look out because the scenery is so interesting, like the blue sky and the red sun. I always take photos and share it with my friends online. Always I.

✓ Yes, I always look out because the scenery is so interesting, like the blue sky and the red sun. I always take photos and share them with my friends online. I always do.

句子中“share it with my friends”中的代词与先行词“photos”在数上一致性错误，photos 为复数，应该用复数代词 them；另外句尾的“You Always I”词序不对，应改为“I always do”或删除以使句子完整。建议：注意代词与指代名词的数一致，以及英语中主语、状语、谓语的常规词序（主语在前，副词位于主语后或句首）。

× Yes, I always took photos and shared it with my partners because I think share the photos to others is a good way to improve our. Fuelling.

✓ Yes, I always take photos and share them with my friends because I think sharing photos with others is a good way to improve our skills.

原句中时态混用，问题是题目为习惯性行为，应使用一般现在时（take/share），而原句使用过去时（took/shared）。此外“share the photos to others”介词用法错误，应为“share photos with others”；“improve our. Fuelling.”词语不连贯，推测为“improve our skills”。建议：根据语境选择正确时态（习惯用一般现在时），使用正确的介词短语“share with”，并保证名词短语完整。

× Yes, I always took photos and shared it with my partners because I think share the photos to others is a good way to improve our. Fuelling.

✓ Yes, I always take photos and share them with my friends because I think sharing photos with others is a good way to improve our skills.

“shared it with my partners”中代词 it 指代前面的 photos（复数），应使用复数代词 them；另外“my partners”用词不自然，应该用 friends 或 classmates 视情境而定。建议：复数名词做先行词时用复数代词 them，注意选择自然的名词搭配。

× Yes, I always took photos and shared it with my partners because I think share the photos to others is a good way to improve our. Fuelling.

✓ Yes, I always take photos and share them with my friends because I think sharing photos with others is a good way to improve our skills.

短语“share the photos to others”中介词用错，正确搭配是“share something with someone”。建议记住常见动词与介词的固定搭配，例如“share with”。

× Always I.

✓ I always do.

原句词序错误，英语中副词一般放在主语之后或句首，单独的“Always I”不能构成完整句子。建议把句子补全为“I always do”或把副词放到句首“I always…”并接完整谓语。

× See because the scenery is so good and I'm not like to go hiking because I'm lazy so I don't want to go to the mountains to see the scenery and see has sun one afternoon.

✓ I prefer the sea because the scenery is so nice and I don't like going hiking because I'm lazy, so I don't want to go to the mountains to see the scenery. I want to see the sun one afternoon.

原句时态与动词形式混乱（如“I'm not like to go hiking”应为“I don't like going hiking”），并且不定式与动名词误用。句子断句和表达也不通顺。建议：使用一般现在时表达偏好（prefer，don't like），将动词与 -ing 形式正确搭配（like doing），并把句子分成更清晰的几部分。

× I'm not like to go hiking because I'm lazy

✓ I don't like going hiking because I'm lazy

动词“like”后接不定式或动名词时在表示喜好习惯时常用动名词形式，且否定应使用助动词 do（don't like），不能用“I'm not like”。建议将否定写为“I don't like”并用动名词“going”。