Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意语法和句子简洁性。回答应直接开门见山，然后用一两句具体理由支持。修正动词形式（makes → make），删除重复片段（“what the view it what the view is”），把句子分成不超过五句并使用连接词如“because”或“so”。可以添加具体细节，例如喜欢的景色种类或观察时的感受。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the changing scenery relaxing. For example, I enjoy watching old buildings and green fields pass by, which helps me feel more connected to the place I'm visiting.

제안: 注意时态和习惯表达（例如：I usually don't take photos while the car is moving）。删除多余重复（如“while the car is moving”多次出现）并完成句子结尾。使用衔接词如“so”或“therefore”，并给出具体例子说明何时拍照（例如停车在景点时）。保持句子数量不超过五句。

예시: I usually don't take photos while the car is moving because it makes me feel dizzy. Therefore, I take pictures only when the car stops at a viewpoint or a rest area, so I can frame the scene properly and enjoy taking the shot.

제안: 用更自然的表达和正确的语法（例如：I prefer the mountains because I'm definitely a mountain person；atmospheres surrounding on the mountains → the atmosphere in the mountains）。不要重复意思，提供具体细节说明为什么喜欢，比如喜欢的活动或具体感受。保持回答简洁明了并用连接词如“because”或“so”。

예시: I prefer the mountains because I'm definitely a mountain person. I enjoy hiking and breathing the fresh, pine-scented air, which makes me feel refreshed and relaxed after a busy week.

× Yes, I would definitely look out at a window while traveling by bus or car because this can makes me feel excited and get imagine what the view it what the view is and enjoy the beautiful scenery of that city or the country.

✓ Yes, I would definitely look out of the window while traveling by bus or car because this can make me feel excited, help me imagine what the view is like, and enjoy the beautiful scenery of the city or the countryside.

错误类型: 动词 + -ing 形式/动词形式及词序问题。解释（简体中文）：句子中有多个动词形式错误：'makes' 与主语 'this' 搭配后应使用原形 'make' 因为前面有情态动词或类似结构的语境；'get imagine' 非正确搭配，正确用法是 'help me imagine' 或直接用 'imagine'；'what the view it what the view is' 是重复且词序错误，正确表达为 'what the view is like'。另外介词用法微调为 'look out of the window'，以及 'the city or the country' 改为更自然的 'the city or the countryside'。建议：1) 注意情态动词或类似结构后面动词用原形；2) 避免重复短语，先在脑中理清要表达的意思再组织句子；3) 学习常见搭配（如 'help someone do something', 'imagine something', 'look out of the window', 'be like' 用于描述样子）。

× Well, I usually don't take the photo while the car is moving because whenever I take the photos while the car is moving, I will feel very dizzy. So I always taking a photo snaps when whenever the car is stopped at one of the sights inside so that I can enjoy the.

✓ Well, I usually don't take photos while the car is moving because whenever the car is moving I feel very dizzy. So I always take photos when the car is stopped at a sight so that I can enjoy it.

错误类型: 动词现在分词形式/动词形式和冗余问题。解释（简体中文）：句中 'I will feel' 在一般习惯性行为中更自然使用一般现在时 'I feel'；'I always taking a photo snaps' 是错误的动词形式与冗余名词，正确应为 'I always take photos'；'when whenever' 有重复，保留一个即可；句尾 'enjoy the.' 不完整，需补全为 'enjoy it' 或具体宾语。建议：1) 描述习惯性动作时使用一般现在时；2) 注意动词与主语的一致及不混用进行时/一般时；3) 避免重复词（如 when/whenever）和多余名词。

× I prefer the mountains because I'm definitely the mountain person. I enjoy the atmospheres surrounding on the mountains. Whenever walking into the forest it can makes me feel refreshed and relaxed.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I'm definitely a mountain person. I enjoy the atmosphere surrounding the mountains. Whenever I walk into the forest, it makes me feel refreshed and relaxed.

错误类型: 冠词错误/名词单复数与动词形式问题。解释（简体中文）：'the mountain person' 用法不自然，表示职业或类型时应使用不定冠词 'a mountain person' 或更自然 'a person who likes mountains'；'atmospheres' 多数场合用不可数名词 'atmosphere' 更合适；'surrounding on the mountains' 介词 'on' 多余，应该 'surrounding the mountains'；'Whenever walking into the forest it can makes me' 省略主语且 'can makes' 动词形式错误，应改为 'Whenever I walk into the forest, it makes me...'（或 'it can make me...'）并在习惯性描述中用一般现在时。建议：1) 选择合适的冠词或使用无冠词结构表达身份；2) 注意不可数名词与可数名词的区别；3) 主语不可省略，动词形式要与主语与时态一致；4) 介词搭配要固定（如 'surrounding the mountains'）。