Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然且语法正确的句子直接回应问题，避免重复并添加简短细节。可在句首用主题句，然后用1–2句支持。注意时态和词序，例如将“always be”改为“is always”。

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the views along the route are usually very beautiful. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes and local life as we pass towns and fields.

제안: 回答要更流畅并用恰当的词汇表达原因，修正语法错误並使用连接词组织句子。避免词汇错误（如“capture, change, landscape”应为具体名词或动词短语），并说明具体场景或感受。

예시: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I like capturing changing landscapes, especially at sunrise or when we drive through the countryside. The light and colours at those moments make the photos more memorable.

제안: 回答要更直接自然，减少口头填充词（如“like”重复），修正语法（主谓一致、动词形式）并使用连接词使句子连贯。可以先给出偏好，再说明具体原因并举例。

예시: I prefer the sea to the mountains because the sound of the waves and the fresh breeze help me relax. For example, when I have free time I enjoy walking along the shore or going for a swim, which makes me feel refreshed.

× Yeah, actually I often do it because I think the scenery out of the window always be very beautiful, so I often do it.

✓ Yeah, actually I often do it because I think the scenery out of the window is always very beautiful, so I often do it.

错误类型：现在时态问题。原句中使用“always be”是不符合英语现在时的陈述方式，应该用现在时态的系动词“is”来表达持续的状态。建议：把“be”改为适当的人称和时态形式（此处为第三人称单数现在时“is”）。

× Yes I do. I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I enjoy capture, change, landscape and especially during sunrise or when driven through the countryside.

✓ Yes, I do. I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I enjoy capturing changing landscapes, especially during sunrise or when driving through the countryside.

错误类型：过去分词/动名词使用问题。原句中“enjoy capture, change, landscape”结构不正确，动词“enjoy”后应接动名词（-ing形式）。另外“driven through the countryside”是过去分词短语，语境需用现在分词“driving”。建议：将“capture”改为“capturing”，“change, landscape”合并为“changing landscapes”，并将“driven”改为“driving”。

× Yeah, I prefer like the sea to the mountains because being by the sea likes me.

✓ Yeah, I prefer the sea to the mountains because being by the sea pleases me.

错误类型：代词/搭配使用不当。原句中“prefer like the sea to the mountains”重复使用“prefer”和“like”是不必要且不正确；“being by the sea likes me”也错误地把主体和宾语颠倒。建议：把“prefer like the sea to the mountains”改为更简洁的“prefer the sea to the mountains”，并把“likes me”改为正确的主谓结构“pleases me”或“I like being by the sea”。

× I think the sounds of the waves and the fresh breeze helps me feel unwind and I enjoy walking along the shore or swimming while I have free time.

✓ I think the sounds of the waves and the fresh breeze help me feel relaxed, and I enjoy walking along the shore or swimming when I have free time.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当与主谓一致问题。主语“The sounds of the waves and the fresh breeze”为复数，谓语应用“help”（而非“helps”）。短语“feel unwind”不符合英语表达，正确应为“feel relaxed”或“unwind”。另外“while I have free time”在此处用“when I have free time”更自然。建议：把“helps”改为“help”，“feel unwind”改为“feel relaxed”，并将“while”改为“when”。