Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 在回答时要更直接回应问题并使用简洁连贯的句子。注意语法（时态、冠词、代词和动词搭配）和词序，并用一两句具体细节支持观点。可以使用连接词（because, so, therefore）来增强逻辑性。避免冗长重复，句子不超过五句。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling by bus or car because I often feel a little car sick and focusing on the distance helps. Also, I enjoy watching passing landscapes so I don’t miss beautiful scenes.

제안: 回答要更清晰地表达频率和原因，改进词汇使用（e.g., sometimes, often, prefer）并修正表达（take photos / look at the view）。提供具体例子说明什么时候会拍照，并用连接词如 however, because。保持句子简短且语法正确。

예시: Yes, sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the window, but often I just prefer to enjoy the view. However, if a scene is especially impressive or unusual, I always take a picture to remember it.

제안: 直接给出偏好并说明具体理由，注意语法（形容词比较、冠词、动词形式）和自然表达（e.g., tiring instead of 'have many energy to finish it'）。可以补充一两个支持细节，如活动或感受，使用连接词like because、so。句子不超过五句。

예시: I prefer the sea because I find beaches more relaxing and less physically demanding than hiking in the mountains. For example, I enjoy swimming and walking along the shore, which helps me unwind.

× Yes I do because a by bus or car I very I feel headache so I must to pay attention something to move it feel and I don't want to lose beauty of my life every time and so I look it.

✓ Yes, I do because when I travel by bus or car I often feel very sick and get headaches, so I have to focus on something to distract myself. I also don't want to miss the beauty around me, so I look out the window.

句子结构混乱，多个信息堆在一起，词序和连接词使用不当。建议把长句拆成几句，使用合适的连词（when, so, also），并调整词序（travel by bus or car；feel sick/get headaches；focus on something；look out the window）。这样句子更清晰，意思更连贯。

× Yes I do but sometimes because I think use as to look more beautiful than take photos. But if it is very shock I always to keep the minutes of them.

✓ Yes, I do, but sometimes I think just looking is more beautiful than taking photos. However, if the view is impressive, I always try to capture the moment.

时态和动词形式使用不当（think 用法后接名词性从句或动名词；use as 无意义；take photos 应为 taking photos；always to keep 不正确，应为 always try to capture 或 always keep）。建议使用现在时的一般习惯表达，并用动名词或不定式的正确结构（think (that) ... / think ...ing / try to ...）。此外，将‘shock’替换为更合适的形容词如 impressive 或 striking。

× But if it is very shock I always to keep the minutes of them.

✓ However, if the view is very striking, I always try to keep the memories of it.

名词单复数和词搭配错误：minutes 用法不当，通常应使用 memory(s) 或 moment(s)；them 与前文的 view 单数不一致，应使用 it。建议根据指代对象使用正确的代词和名词复数形式（memories/moments 和 it）。

× I prefer the sea because mountains always very high and I don't have many energy to finish it but say just go to the seaside.

✓ I prefer the sea because mountains are always very high and I don't have much energy to climb them, so I usually go to the seaside instead.

句子结构和动词缺失：缺少 be 动词（mountains are）；many energy 用法错误，应为 much energy；finish it 用法不当，应为 climb them（与 mountains 指代一致）；say just go 表达不自然，应为 usually go / go instead。建议补全动词、使用不可数名词的正确量词（much）并用合适的动词表达动作（climb）。