Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 内容总体自然且直接回答了问题，但可以更简洁有条理：开头给出明确主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持，避免重复（例如不要连续说“sit by the window”两次或重复“enjoy watching the scenery”）。注意句子长度控制在5句内，并在细节间使用连接词以提高连贯性。

예시: Yes, I usually sit by the window when I travel because I love watching the changing scenery. For example, on long trips I often take photos of interesting landscapes and small villages, which helps me remember the journey better.

제안: 回答直接但有语法和表达错误（如“ever changing”需连字符或两词表述，‘kept pictures views’不通），且有重复前一句的信息。应避免重复并使细节更具体：说明什么时候拍照、用什么设备、拍哪类景物。句子保持简短且连贯。

예시: Yes, I often take photos from the window, especially during sunrise or when passing rural areas. I usually use my phone to capture fields, rivers and old houses, then choose a few good shots to keep in my travel album.

제안: 回答存在严重语言错误（代词错误‘she’应为‘the sea’或‘they’，动词形式和表达不自然），且内容笼统。应先直接给出偏好（I prefer the sea/the mountains），然后用一到两条具体原因支持，使用连接词并注意语法与词汇搭配。

예시: I prefer the sea because being by the coast makes me feel free and relaxed. For instance, I enjoy walking on the beach, listening to the waves and breathing the fresh sea air, which always lifts my mood.

× I usually sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the ever changing scenery and kept pictures views from my camera.

✓ I usually sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the ever-changing scenery and taking pictures with my camera.

问题类型：动名词/动词+ing 形式使用错误。句中“kept pictures views from my camera”结构不正确，应使用动名词“taking pictures”来表示拍照的动作，并用“with my camera”表明用相机拍摄。并且“ever changing”需连字符形成复合形容词“ever-changing”。改进建议：遇到表示动作的名词化形式时使用动词+ing（如 taking pictures）；描述方式（用什么工具）用介词短语“with + 名词”。

× Well it's hard to choose but I think she is my favorite because I think she give me a feeling like freedom and fresh.

✓ Well, it's hard to choose, but I think the sea is my favourite because I think it gives me a feeling of freedom and freshness.

问题类型：代词使用错误与搭配问题。原句用“she”指代“the sea”，英语中通常用“it”而不是以性别代词；动词“give”需与第三人称单数主语一致，应为“gives”。另外“feeling like freedom and fresh”搭配不当，应为“a feeling of freedom and freshness”。改进建议：用中性代词“it”指物；注意主谓一致（第三人称单数加-s）；名词短语要用正确的介词和名词形式（a feeling of + 名词）。