Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
수험생
Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery when traveling by car because its view very beautiful.
시험관
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
수험생
Yes I do before I very like take photo of the scenery outside the car window.
시험관
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
수험생
I think I prefer the sea because I can relax, swim freely and relieve stress.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên hơn và có cấu trúc rõ ràng: mở đầu trả lời ngắn gọn, sau đó bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "its view very beautiful" → cần chủ ngữ-động từ chính xác và tính từ phù hợp) và rút gọn câu để không quá dài. Nên dùng liên từ hợp lý nếu thêm chi tiết.
예시: Yes, I often look out of the car window. I enjoy watching the changing landscapes, especially green fields and small villages, because they help me relax during long journeys.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi về trật tự từ và thì. Nên trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do và tần suất nếu cần. Tránh các từ thừa như "before" không phù hợp ở đây và dùng thì hiện tại đơn để nói về thói quen.
예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window. I usually capture interesting views like mountains or old houses, so I can look back at them later.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
점수: 80.0제안: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và trực tiếp, có lý do hỗ trợ. Để cải thiện, thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hoặc ví dụ ngắn để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn và dùng liên từ để nối các ý mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I prefer the sea because I can relax and swim freely, which helps me relieve stress. For example, last summer I spent a week by the coast and felt much more refreshed after daily swims and walks on the beach.
문법
× Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery when traveling by car because its view very beautiful.
✓ Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery when traveling by car because its view is very beautiful.
The sentence omits the verb 'is' after the subject 'view.' Also 'its' correctly refers to 'the car's' view, but adding 'is' completes the clause. Suggestion: include the verb 'is' to form a complete sentence ('the view is very beautiful').
× Yes I do before I very like take photo of the scenery outside the car window.
✓ Yes, I do. Before, I really like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window.
Multiple issues: word order and verb forms are incorrect. 'Very like take photo' is ungrammatical; use 'really like to take' or 'really enjoy taking.' Also 'photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally. Add punctuation between sentences. Suggestion: use 'I really like to take photos' or 'I really enjoy taking photos' and separate ideas with a period or conjunction.
× I think I prefer the sea because I can relax, swim freely and relieve stress.
✓ I think I prefer the sea because I can relax, swim freely, and relieve stress.
Grammatically this sentence is acceptable, but it lacked a serial comma before 'and' for clarity. No tense change needed. Suggestion: include a comma before the final item in a list for readability ('swim freely, and relieve stress').
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