Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体可以理解，但存在语法和连贯性问题（时态混用、句子断裂），句子较重复且缺少具体细节。请注意时态一致，使用主句加1–2个支持句，并用连接词使表达更连贯。可以增加具体细节（例如喜欢看什么样的风景、看风景时的感受或原因）。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing green fields and small villages pass by, which makes me feel relaxed and calm. Also, I sometimes notice local architecture or people going about their day, so it helps me learn about the area.

제안: 回答简洁且直接，但用词有改进空间（“as a memorial”不太自然），细节不足。建议用更自然的短语说明目的，并补充具体例子（比如用手机还是相机，拍什么类型的景色，什么时候会分享或查看这些照片）。同时可用连接词扩展内容。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window to remember the trip. I usually use my phone to capture landscapes like sunsets or interesting buildings, and later I upload the best shots to social media or keep them in a travel album. This way I can look back on the journey and share memories with friends.

제안: 回答有多处口误和不完整（词语缺失、结尾不完整），表达不清。应先直接给出偏好的明确句子，然后用一到两个完整的支持句说明原因和举例，注意避免停顿词并修正发音或拼写错误（sea而不是 say）。例如说明不喜欢爬山的具体原因并给出替代偏好活动。

예시: I prefer the sea because I find the beach relaxing and easy to enjoy. I don't like mountain climbing much since it is physically demanding and I get tired quickly, so I prefer walking along the shore, swimming, or reading while listening to the waves.

× Yes I do. I often do this and I really enjoyed it.

✓ Yes, I do. I often do this and I really enjoy it.

原句中“enjoyed”是过去时，但说话者在表达经常性、现在仍然发生的动作或感受时应使用一般现在时。建议使用一般现在时“enjoy”来保持时态一致并表示经常性或现在的状态。

× When I travel by bus or car I look out of the windows and there's passing landscapes.

✓ When I travel by bus or car, I look out of the windows and there are passing landscapes.

原句中“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词“landscapes”应使用复数形式“there are”。此外建议在“bus or car”后加逗号以分隔从句，保证语流自然。

× Makes me very delighted.

✓ It makes me very delighted.

原句缺少主语，使用动词独立成句不符合英语句子结构。需加上形式主语“it”或把句子与前句合并为从句，例如“It makes me very delighted.”，使句子完整。

× I take many beautiful photos of the scenery outside as a memorial.

✓ I take many beautiful photos of the scenery outside as a memento.

原句中“memorial”通常指纪念碑或纪念仪式，不适合表示“纪念品/留念”。应使用“memento”或“souvenir”。此外若保留“memorial”需改写为“as a memorial to ...”但更自然是用“memento”。中文建议使用更准确词汇以避免语义错误。

× I prefer the say that's because, uh, going mountain climbing is a very tough for me.

✓ I prefer the sea. That's because, uh, mountain climbing is very tough for me.

原句中“the say”拼写错误且使用不当，应为“the sea”。“going mountain climbing”中的“going”多余，直接用“mountain climbing”更自然。冠词“a very tough”搭配错误，形容词“tough”修饰人或活动时不需要不定冠词，应为“very tough”。以上为多处错误，主要集中在代词/指示错误与冠词使用不当。

× I don't have the so I don't have enough energy to climb.

✓ I don't have the strength, so I don't have enough energy to climb.

原句“I don't have the”不完整，缺少名词补语。应补上“strength”或“energy”等名词以构成完整句子。建议把句子合并为“..., so ...”表示因果，并避免重复意思（strength与energy含义接近），可简化为“I don't have enough energy to climb.”。