Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Good direct response and relevant reasons. Improve accuracy and naturalness by correcting small grammar errors and avoiding redundancy. Keep sentences concise (max 5) and use a linking word for clarity. Add a specific example to make the answer more vivid.

예시: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax and passes the time. For example, last month I noticed an old riverside market from the bus and decided to visit it later. Also, looking outside gives my eyes a break from my phone.

제안: Good content and clear preference. Improve grammar, phrasing, and coherence: use linking phrases, correct quantifiers, and provide a brief specific example. Avoid overly casual phrasing like “a few is too amazing.”

예시: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the car window, especially in new places because the views are different. For instance, on a recent trip I photographed a valley covered in fog and later shared the best shots on Instagram.

제안: Strong, direct answer with reasons. Improve cohesion by linking sentences and adding a concrete detail or short example. Slightly refine wording for naturalness (e.g., 'relax myself' -> 'relax').

예시: I definitely prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and exploring trails. For example, last summer I spent a weekend trekking in a national park and the quiet forest scenery helped me unwind and breathe fresh air.

× Yes, I often look outside the window when I'm traveling by bus or car because it really helps me relax and pass the time.

✓ Yes, I often look out of the window when I'm traveling by bus or car because it really helps me relax and pass the time.

Use of preposition: 'look outside the window' is understandable but the more natural and grammatically precise phrase is 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window.' This is an issue of preposition choice rather than tense; adjust to 'look out of the window' to be clear and natural. Suggestion: Use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' in spoken English for natural phrasing.

× Sometimes I spot the interesting things or places that I would like to check out in the later and it gives my eyes a break from my phone.

✓ Sometimes I spot interesting things or places that I would like to check out later, and it gives my eyes a break from my phone.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'interesting things', incorrect phrase 'in the later' and missing comma before 'and'. Correct quantifier usage removes 'the' because 'interesting things' is general, 'in the later' is incorrect — use 'later'. Also add a comma to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: Remove unnecessary articles before plural general nouns and use 'later' for a future time reference.

× Yes, I love capturing beautiful landscapes from car window, especially when I'm traveling and it's a new place for me.

✓ Yes, I love capturing beautiful landscapes from the car window, especially when I'm traveling and it's a new place for me.

Error: missing definite article 'the' before 'car window'. When referring to a specific window (the one of the car you are in), use 'the'. Suggestion: Use 'the car window' or 'a car window' depending on context; here 'the' is appropriate.

× Sometimes a few is too amazing not to take a picture and I really enjoy sharing those photos on social media.

✓ Sometimes a few things are too amazing not to take a picture of, and I really enjoy sharing those photos on social media.

Errors: 'a few' is a quantifier that requires a plural noun following it; 'is' should be 'are' for plural agreement. Also missing object of 'take a picture of' and missing comma before 'and'. Rephrase to 'a few things are too amazing not to take a picture of'. Suggestion: Ensure noun follows quantifiers like 'a few' and match verb number with the subject.

× It's also much quieter than the sea so I can relax myself and enjoy the fresh air.

✓ It's also much quieter than the sea, so I can relax and enjoy the fresh air.

Error: unnecessary reflexive pronoun 'myself'. 'Relax' is intransitive here and does not need an object; using 'myself' is unidiomatic. Also add a comma before 'so' linking two clauses. Suggestion: Omit reflexive pronouns when the verb does not require an object; write 'relax' instead of 'relax myself'.