Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ve ilgili ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve biraz tekrara yönelik ifadeler var. Konuyu doğrudan belirten bir konu cümlesi kullanmışsınız, ama "I always been curious" gibi zaman uyumunu düzeltin ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri daha akıcı hale getirin (ör. "because" yerine "as" veya "since" ile çeşitlendirin) ve bir veya iki özgül örnek ekleyin (ör. hangi manzaralar ilgilendiriyor?). Maksimum 5 cümleyi geçmeyin.

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I'm travelling, especially in new places, because I’m curious about different landscapes. For example, I enjoy watching rural fields and old villages pass by, which gives me a sense of local life. As a result, I feel more connected to the place I'm visiting.

제안: Cevap açık, mantıklı ve iyi yapılandırılmış; sebep belirterek yanıtlamışsınız. Ancak cümle bağlamında küçük akıcılık ve tekrar iyileştirilebilir. "Because of that" yerine bağlaçlarla (e.g. "so", "therefore") daha kısa ve doğal bağlayın. Ayrıca bir örnek fotoğraf türü (manzara, tarihi bina) ekleyerek cevabı daha özgül hale getirin.

예시: I used to take photos when my family drove, but recently I'm usually the driver, so I focus on the road and can't take pictures. For instance, I miss photographing coastal views or interesting buildings when I’m behind the wheel.

제안: Cevap kısa ve samimi, fakat dilbilgisi ve ifade hataları (ör. "best weave" muhtemelen yanlış kelime) anlamı bozuyor. Önce net bir tercih ifadesi verin veya iki tercihten neden her ikisini sevdiğinizi açıklayın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak nedenleri kısa ve özgül örneklerle destekleyin. Kelime seçimine dikkat edin ("view" veya "scene" gibi doğru kelimeyi kullanın).

예시: I like both, but if I had to choose I’d pick the mountains because I enjoy hiking and peaceful views. However, I also love the sea for relaxing on the beach and watching sunsets, so a place with both mountains and sea would be perfect for me.

× Yes, I often look out the window when I'm traveling by bus or car, especially when I'm visiting new places because I always been curious about seeing different scenery and discovering new places.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window when I'm traveling by bus or car, especially when I'm visiting new places because I have always been curious about seeing different scenery and discovering new places.

The error is a present perfect formation problem: 'always been curious' omits the auxiliary have. Use present perfect 'have been' to show a continuous state from the past until now. Suggestion: include the correct auxiliary for present perfect (have/has) when describing experiences or states that continue to the present.

× I used to take photos while traveling with my family by car, but lately I'm usually the one driving so I try to focus on the road. Because of that, I don't really get the chance to take photos anymore.

✓ I used to take photos while traveling with my family by car, but lately I'm usually the one driving, so I try to focus on the road; because of that, I don't really get the chance to take photos anymore.

The original has a sentence fragment 'Because of that' starting a new sentence, which weakens cohesion. Combine clauses properly with a comma and conjunction or use a semicolon to connect related ideas. Suggestion: avoid starting a short dependent clause with 'Because' as a separate sentence; attach it to the main clause for correct sentence structure.

× To be honest, I like both of them. In my opinion the best weave is when you can see the mountains and see it together.

✓ To be honest, I like both of them. In my opinion the best view is when you can see the mountains and the sea together.

There are word choice and reference issues: 'weave' is a misspelling of 'view', and 'see it together' has an unclear pronoun reference. Correct the vocabulary and use 'the sea' explicitly to match 'the mountains' and make the sentence coherent. Suggestion: choose the correct noun 'view' and ensure pronouns clearly refer to the intended noun or repeat the noun for clarity.