Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I usually look out the window), avoid tense errors and repetitions, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / so). Keep your answer to 2–4 sentences and use accurate vocabulary (excited -> enjoy; memorable -> memorable moments).

예시: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel, especially on planes, because the views are very beautiful. For example, I enjoy seeing clouds and landscapes from above, which makes the journey more memorable.

제안: Answer directly (Yes or No) then give a clear reason and a brief example. Fix common grammar mistakes (like subject-verb agreement and infinitive use) and use linking phrases such as because or for example. Limit to 2–3 sentences and include a specific detail (what you photograph and why).

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I like mountains and the sea. For example, I usually photograph coastal views or mountain ranges to remember the trip.

제안: Give a direct preference sentence (I prefer the sea) and explain with one or two specific reasons using linking words (because / so). Correct grammar (I like swimming; when I go to the sea) and avoid filler phrases (Well, in my opinion, I think). Keep it concise and include a brief example of an activity you enjoy.

예시: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and warm summer weather. For example, when I visit the coast I swim and relax on the beach, which I find very relaxing.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I do.

The examiner asked a general, habitual question in present tense ('Do you look... when travelling...?'), so reply should be in present simple. 'Yes, I did' is past tense and mismatches the question. Use 'Yes, I do' for habitual actions.

× I'm very, very excited in to interested in to look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or especially travelling by plane because it's it's very beautiful and very memorable when I want to memo memory.

✓ I'm very, very excited and interested in looking out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus, and especially when traveling by plane, because it's very beautiful and very memorable.

Multiple errors: incorrect preposition and infinitive usage ('in to interested in to'), incorrect verb form after 'interested in' (requires gerund), redundant words ('it's it's', 'memo memory') and awkward phrasing. Use 'interested in' + gerund ('looking'), coordinate ideas with 'and', and remove unclear words. This fits present habitual preference.

× Of course, I'm very like to look out the window when I'm travel, especially the views of the mountains or a sea, because it's very beautiful and I usually to take a photo with the.

✓ Of course, I really like looking out the window when I travel, especially at views of the mountains or the sea, because they're very beautiful and I usually take photos.

Errors include wrong adjective/verb choice ('I'm very like' should be 'I really like'), wrong verb form after preposition ('when I'm travel' should be 'when I travel'), incorrect preposition ('views of' plus 'at' is natural), article misuse ('a sea' should be 'the sea'), unnecessary 'to' after 'usually', and incomplete phrase at the end. Use gerund after 'like' and correct plural 'photos'.

× Well, in my opinion, I think that I really like see because when I'm go travel to a sea, it's a summer and I really like summer.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I really like the sea because when I go to the seaside it's summer and I really like summer.

Redundant phrases ('in my opinion, I think that'), incorrect verb forms ('like see' should be 'like the sea' or 'like seeing'), incorrect verb phrase ('when I'm go travel to a sea' should be 'when I go to the seaside'), and article problems ('a sea' incorrect). Simplify and use correct verbs and nouns.

× I really like to swimming and I love sea.

✓ I really like swimming and I love the sea.

After 'like' both infinitive and gerund can be used, but with 'swimming' the gerund is natural; 'to swimming' is incorrect. Also 'love sea' needs the definite article 'the sea'. Use 'swimming' and 'the sea'.