Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 语言要更自然、语法更准确，避免重复。回答要有主题句并用一到两句具体细节支持，例如什么时候更常看窗外、看到什么样的风景。注意动词时态和固定搭配（travel by car, look out of the window）。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. I especially enjoy watching countryside views like green fields and small villages, because they are peaceful and different from my city life.

제안: 回答要简洁且语法正确，避免多余词汇。先给出直接回答，再说明具体情形（什么时候拍、用什么设备、拍照的目的）。注意词汇搭配（take photos, impressive, save on my phone）。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window if it looks impressive. For example, I take pictures of unusual landscapes or colourful sunsets to save them on my phone and share with my friends.

제안: 先直接回答偏好，然后给出具体理由并用连接词衔接。修正语法和用词（prefer the sea, I like the colour blue, I feel excited and amazed）。可举一两个具体情景说明为什么喜欢海。

예시: I prefer the sea because I love the blue colour and the sound of the waves. When I visit the coast, I feel relaxed and excited, especially at sunrise when the sky and water look beautiful.

× Definitely, uh, when I traveling by parcel car, I will look up this look out the window at the scenery because I think the scenery on the road was very beautiful and so charming.

✓ Definitely, uh, when I am travelling by car, I will look out of the window at the scenery because I think the scenery on the road is very beautiful and so charming.

问题类型：动词+ing 以及时态与介词使用。 解释：句中“when I traveling”缺少助动词“am”，应为进行时“when I am travelling”。“parcel car”不自然，改为“car”。“look up this look out the window”冗余且有错误，应为“look out of the window”或“look out the window”。此外原句中“the scenery on the road was very beautiful”与前后时态不一致，应使用一般现在时“is”描述持续存在的景象。建议：在进行时前加适当的be动词，简化冗余短语，使用正确介词短语“look out of the window”，注意时态一致性。

× For sure I will take out the photos of the scenery outside the car of the window.

✓ For sure I will take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

问题类型：介词使用不当。 解释：短语“take out the photos of”在此语境不恰当，应为“take photos of”表示“拍照片”。“outside the car of the window”语序和介词错误，正确为“outside the car window”或“outside the car’s window”。建议：使用固定搭配“take photos of”，并将修饰词按英语常规放置：名词短语前置限定或使用所有格。

× If it is beautiful or it is an impress make me impressive, I will take the photos to record in my phone.

✓ If it is beautiful or impressive and makes me feel amazed, I will take photos to save on my phone.

问题类型：句子结构错误与形容词使用不当。 解释：原句“it is an impress make me impressive”结构混乱，单词“impress”被错误当作名词/形容词使用，应使用形容词“impressive”或动词短语“makes me impressed/amazé”。“take the photos to record in my phone”表达不自然，改为“take photos to save on my phone”。建议：重构句子，选择正确的词类（形容词vs动词），使用自然短语如“makes me feel impressed/amazéd”，并用“save on my phone”或“save to my phone”。

× Well, that's quite a difficult problem. I think I prefer sea because I look up the I like the blue color.

✓ Well, that's quite a difficult question. I think I prefer the sea because I like the color blue.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用不当及词汇选择。 解释：原句中“difficult problem”语境上更常用“difficult question”。“I prefer sea”缺少定冠词，应为“prefer the sea”。“I look up the I like the blue color”语序混乱且多余，“look up”不必要，应为“I like the color blue”或“I like blue”。建议：使用正确名词搭配（the sea），删去多余短语，按英语习惯表达颜色“the color blue”或简单“blue”。

× So when I see the old sea or ocean, I feel exciting and amazing.

✓ So when I see the sea or the ocean, I feel excited and amazed.

问题类型：现在时态与形容词形式错误。 解释：形容词“exciting”用于描述事物使人感到兴奋，而描述人的感受应使用“excited”。类似地，“amazing”描述事物本身，描述人的感受应为“amazed”。“old sea”不自然，应去掉“old”。建议：用正确的形容词形式来表达人的感受（excited, amazed），并删去不必要或不自然的修饰词。