Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意句子结构和时态，先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体原因或例子来支持。避免不连贯或错误的词序，可以用连接词使表达更自然。比如：先说“Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car or bus.” 再说明理由和具体细节。

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car or bus because the scenery in my country is very beautiful. For example, on my way to work I enjoy watching green fields and traditional houses, which helps me relax.

제안: 注意动词形式和名词使用，先给出直接回答，然后用一两句具体说明你拍什么、为什么拍以及举例。使用连接词（for example, because）来组织句子，并避免拼写或词汇错误。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I enjoy capturing interesting views. For example, I like photographing winding roads and mountain ridges when travelling, and later I sort the best pictures into an album.

제안: 先给出明确的偏好（mountains or the sea），然后解释原因并提供具体细节或例子。注意代词使用和形容词的位置，避免模糊或不相关的词语。用一两句连接词如 because 或 for example 使表达更连贯。

예시: I prefer the sea because I love the calming sound of the waves and the wide open views. For example, when I visit the coast I enjoy walking along the beach at sunset and collecting shells, which makes me feel relaxed.

× Hustle car yes, I usually. Because will is very beautiful in my country, so I usually say.

✓ Yes, I usually do. The scenery in my country is very beautiful, so I often look out the window.

原句结构混乱，多处词序和用词错误，难以表达完整意思。需要把回答分成两句：第一句用简单回答“我通常会看”，用一般现在时；第二句说明原因，用完整主谓结构（The scenery in my country is very beautiful），并用连词so引出结果。建议用固定搭配“look out the window”表述看窗外风景，避免使用不明词汇如“Hustle”、“will”。

× Yes, I usually taking photo of the sensor outside because I like take photo wheels.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside because I like taking photos.

原句中动词形式错误：'usually taking' 应为一般现在时 'usually take'；'take photo wheels' 和 'sensor' 用词不当，应为 'take photos of the scenery'；喜欢做某事用 'like doing sth.' 更自然，因此最后部分改为 'like taking photos'。建议掌握一般现在时的使用和动词+ -ing 表达喜好。

× I prefer C because I like, I very like Blue because she is very beautiful. So I see.

✓ I prefer the sea because I like it. I really like the blue color because it is very beautiful.

原句代词使用不当且表达不清：'C' 应替换为明确名词 'the sea'；'I like, I very like Blue' 中重复且语序错误，'very like' 不正确，应为 'really like' 或 'like it very much'；'Blue' 若指颜色应小写并用 'blue color'，若指事物要明确。最后 'So I see' 无意义，应去掉或改为相关结论。建议使用正确代词（it）指代前文名词，并用自然的程度副词如 'really' 或 'very much'。