Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 总体不错，但存在语法和表达不够自然的问题。注意使用正确的短语（例如：look out of the window → look out the window；watching a scenery → watching the scenery 或 admiring the scenery）。避免冗长或不连贯的句子，改用一到两句清晰的回应，然后用一两个具体细节支持。描述事件时注意时态和词汇准确性（例如：I once saw a small village with castle-like buildings from the bus）。

예시: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable. For example, once I saw a small village with castle-like buildings from the bus, so I later looked it up online and added it to my travel list because I wanted to see its historic architecture in person.

제안: 回答表达有意义，但存在句子不完整和用词错误（例如“I like and views change quickly”不通顺；“I used my photo to capture”应为“I took a photo to capture”）。建议用一两句清楚地表达喜好并用具体细节支持，注意动词搭配和连词使用，使逻辑更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery through car windows because the views change so quickly and you can catch unique moments. For example, last summer I took a photo of golden sunlight spilling over rolling hills from a low angle, and I later shared that picture on social media.

제안: 回答清楚表达了偏好，但存在词汇错误和不自然表达（例如“grass fish”无意义，可能想说“go fishing”或“watch wildlife”）。建议用准确词汇并提供一两个具体原因或例子，句子保持简洁且使用连接词增加连贯性。

예시: I definitely prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking on nature trails and the scenery is more peaceful than the beach. For example, watching the sunrise from a mountaintop, with pink and orange clouds, is an unforgettable experience and lets me relax away from the crowds.

× Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because watching a scenery helps me relax and pass the time.

✓ Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because watching scenery helps me relax and pass the time.

句中“watching a scenery”中不应使用不定冠词“a”，且“scenery”是不可数名词，不与不定冠词连用。应该改为“watching scenery”。建议：遇到不可数名词（如scenery, information, advice）时不要加不定冠词。

× For example, once I spoke it at the small village with castle like buildings from the bus.

✓ For example, once I saw a small village with castle-like buildings from the bus.

原句“spoke it at the small village”结构不对，用词错误。应使用动词“see”表示“看见”，并把形容词复合词写成“castle-like”。另外“from the bus”位置放在句末更自然。建议：注意动词选择（saw 而不是 spoke），以及复合形容词用连字符。

× So I later researched it and added to my travel list because I wanted to visit and explore its historical architecture.

✓ So I later researched it and added it to my travel list because I wanted to visit and explore its historical architecture.

短语“added to my travel list”缺少宾语“it”。需要宾语来表示“把它添加到我的旅行清单”。建议：及物动词后补充必要的宾语（add it to ...）。

× Yes, I love taking pictures of the scenery through car windows, especially when I'm traveling because I like and views change quickly.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of the scenery through car windows, especially when I'm traveling because I like how the views change quickly.

原句“because I like and views change quickly”结构不完整，缺少连接词和从句结构。应改为“because I like how the views change quickly”来说明原因。建议：当描述“喜欢……如何变化”时，用“how + 从句”。

× For example, last summer I used my photo to capture golden sunlight spilling over rolling hills from a low angle, and I often added and shared this photo on social media.

✓ For example, last summer I used my camera to capture golden sunlight spilling over rolling hills from a low angle, and I often uploaded and shared this photo on social media.

“used my photo to capture”表达不自然，通常用“use a camera”或“take a photo”。此外“added and shared”不明确，“added”不是常用搭配，改为“uploaded and shared”。建议：注意固定搭配，例如“take a photo/use a camera”，“upload/share on social media”。

× I definitely prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking on nature trails and the views are breathtaking.

✓ I definitely prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking on nature trails and the views there are breathtaking.

句中“the views are breathtaking”虽然语法上可接受，但加上地点副词“there”使句子更明确地指代“山”的景色。建议：在对比地点时加入“there”以增强指向性。

× It's much quieter than the beach, so I can relax and grass fish here.

✓ It's much quieter than the beach, so I can relax and go fishing here.

“grass fish”不是正确短语，可能是拼写或词语选择错误。应为“go fishing”（去钓鱼）。建议：使用正确的动词短语表达活动（如go fishing, go hiking）。

× For example, watching the sunrise from a mountain top with pink and orange clouds is an unforgettable experience.

✓ For example, watching the sunrise from a mountaintop with pink and orange clouds is an unforgettable experience.

“mountain top”更常见写作“mountaintop”或“mountain top”为复合形式；这里语法正确，但统一词形更好。本句属于动名词结构正确，仅建议拼写合一。建议：注意复合名词的书写方式（mountaintop 或 mountain top）。