Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子不够自然且有语法错误。回答应直接回应问题并给出一到两条具体细节，例如何时或为什么会看窗外。注意介词用法，应说 “look out of the window” 或 “look out the window”。尽量将回答控制在不超过五句，并使用连接词如 “because” 或 “so” 来丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, on my commute I like to watch the people and buildings pass by, which helps me relax.

제안: 回答有积极信息但不够具体且和问题的核心（是否拍照）没有直接衔接。应先直接回答“是”或“否”，然后说明频率、原因或例子，并用连接词如 “so” 或 “and” 来衔接。避免与问题无关的细节。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the window because the views can be unique. For instance, I usually sit by the window and take pictures of sunsets or interesting landmarks during trips.

제안: 回答含糊且语法不自然。应先明确表态（例如更喜欢山或海或两者都喜欢），然后给出具体原因或比较，并用连接词如 “because”, “although” 或 “but” 来组织句子。若两者都喜欢，可以说明在什么情况下更喜欢哪个。

예시: I like both mountains and the sea, but I prefer the mountains if I have to choose because I enjoy hiking and quiet nature. However, I also love the sea for relaxing on the beach during hot weather.

× Yes, I look on the window every day.

✓ Yes, I look out the window every day.

此句中介词用错了。英语中表示“朝外看/通过窗户看”应使用介词短语 look out the window（或 look out of the window）。使用 look on the window 是不正确的搭配。建议记住常用搭配：look out (the window)、look through (the window) 用法区别在于是否强调穿过窗户所见的景物。

× Absolutely, I'd like to sit at the window seat.

✓ Absolutely, I'd like to sit in the window seat.

此句中的介词搭配不准确，seat 前通常用 in the window seat 而不是 at the window seat。该问题可归为动词/介词搭配与名词短语使用（这里影响到动词短语 sit + 地点短语），重点是介词选择。建议记住常用固定搭配：sit in the window seat / sit in the aisle seat。

× Well, I like mountain and sea, and the better is mountain with sea.

✓ Well, I like the mountains and the sea, and I prefer the mountains with the sea.

原句中名词复数和冠词使用错误：表示山和海时通常用复数 the mountains, the sea（sea 可用单数，但与 mountains 搭配时更自然）。此外，表达“更喜欢”应使用 prefer，原句用 the better 不符合英语表达。建议：1) 可将 mountain 变为 mountains; 2) 在复数名词前加定冠词 the（根据上下文）；3) 用 prefer 或 like ... better 来表达偏好。