Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需要更自然、紧凑并直接回应问题。开头可用一句主题句表明是否喜欢看窗外，然后用1-2句具体原因或例子丰富内容。避免语法错误（例如动词形式和介词），并删除重复或多余词语。可以用连接词如 “because”, “for example” 来组织句子。

예시: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by car or bus because I enjoy seeing new places and landscapes. For example, when I visited Spain last year I spent hours watching the countryside and small villages pass by, which helped me remember the trip better.

제안: 回答要更简洁、有条理。用一到两句说明通常做法，再用一句具体例子或原因支持。注意句子结构和时态，避免重复词（例如两个“to”）。使用连接词如 “but”, “so” 来衔接原因和结果。

예시: I usually prefer to watch and remember the scenery with my own eyes, but if I have time I will also take photos or short videos with my phone. For instance, on long trips I often record a few clips so I can look back at the views later.

제안: 回答应先直接给出偏好的明确主题句，然后用1-2句具体理由支持。避免啰嗦和重复（例如“very huge, enormous”表达冗余），注意形容词搭配（‘love the sea’ 更自然）。可使用连接词如 “because” 或 “although” 来组织对比。

예시: I prefer the sea because I find the sound of waves relaxing and I enjoy swimming and beach walks. Although mountains are impressive and peaceful, I usually choose coastal holidays for the fresh air and outdoor activities.

× Yes, of course I love to look at the window when go traveling another country.

✓ Yes, of course I love to look out of the window when I go travelling in another country.

句中缺少动词-ing形式和必要的主语/介词。应使用固定搭配 "look out of the window"，并在从句中加主语 "I" 和动词的正确形式 "go travelling"。另外表示“在另一个国家”应使用介词短语 "in another country"。建议记住在从句中保留主语，并使用正确的动词形式和介词。

× Especially my dream is to live all over the world each month or each every each year, few months or.

✓ My dream is to live all over the world, spending a few months in different countries each year.

原句结构混乱，词序和重复词（each every each）导致无法理解。需要重组句子，明确时间频率（each year）与时长（a few months in different countries）。建议先确定主语和谓语，再用短语清晰表达时间频率。

× Usually I will use my eyes to appreciate the beautiful scenery and put them in my deep memory and if I have the spare time I will take my phone to take some photos or videos to to avoid if one day.

✓ Usually I use my eyes to appreciate the beautiful scenery and store it in my memory, and if I have spare time I will take photos or videos with my phone.

原句存在冗余助动词和不正确的分词使用（to to avoid if one day 无意义）。应去掉多余的 will（在习惯性动作中用一般现在时更自然），将 "put them in my deep memory" 改为自然表达 "store it in my memory"，并把拍照的工具和动作合并为 "take photos or videos with my phone"。建议避免重复词汇并用简洁的句子表达原因和结果。

× It's very hard to make a decision between the mountain and the sea because they both very huge, enormous and make people feel we are small in the world.

✓ It's very hard to make a decision between the mountains and the sea because they are both very huge and make people feel small in the world.

“mountain”在泛指两者比较时应使用复数 "mountains"（或加定冠词视情况），且缺少系动词 "are"。"very huge, enormous" 中重复意义，保留一个程度词即可。最后的从句可简化为 "make people feel small"。建议注意名词单复数与系动词的一致以及避免重复近义词。

× Umm, I especially for loving the sea.

✓ Umm, I especially love the sea.

短语 "especially for loving" 是不自然且不正确的搭配。英语中表达“我特别喜欢海”应直接用动词结构 "especially love"。建议学习常见副词与动词的固定搭配，避免在动词前插入多余介词。