Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 问题回答不完整且句子断裂较多。建议先用一句完整的主题句直接回答（I often/usually/always look out the window when travelling by car.），然后用1–2句具体细节支持，并用连接词衔接（for example, because, so）。注意句子完整性与语法，避免短促的片段。可以练习把零散想法组织成2–3个完整句子。

예시: I usually look out of the window when I travel by car because I enjoy the changing landscape. For example, I like watching rivers and mountains pass by since they are calming and interesting to observe.

제안: 回答很简短且缺少细节。建议先直接回答（Yes, I often take photos of scenery.），然后给出原因或频率并举例（for instance, I often take photos when the light is good or when there is a special view）。保持句子完整并使用连接词如 because 或 for example 来丰富回答。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car because beautiful light and interesting landscapes appear unexpectedly. For instance, I usually stop to take pictures of a river or a mountain when I see a great view.

제안: 回答有重复和语法错误，表达不连贯。建议先给出明确观点（I prefer the mountains.），然后用2句具体、连贯的原因支持（I enjoy hiking; the views relax me; I feel refreshed at the top）。使用连接词（because, so, and）并注意单复数与动词形式。控制在3–4句以内。

예시: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the peaceful atmosphere. Hikes help me relax and clear my mind, and the panoramic views from the top are always rewarding.

× I love looking at.

✓ I love looking at the scenery.

原句不完整，缺少宾语。英语中动词短语“look at”必须有宾语来说明看什么。建议补上名词短语，如“the scenery/landscape”。（句型完整性）

× Do we know why traveling?

✓ Do you know why I prefer traveling by car?

原句结构混乱且缺少主语和宾语，无法表达明确意思。根据上下文，考生想问或说明为何喜欢坐车旅行，需补充主语并明确动词宾语。建议使用完整问句或陈述句，例如“Do you know why I prefer traveling by car?”（句型完整性和明确指代）

× By car because of the landscape.

✓ I prefer traveling by car because of the landscape.

原句缺少主语和谓语，语序不完整。应使用完整句子表达偏好：主语+谓语+原因。建议说“I prefer traveling by car because of the landscape.”（主谓结构）

× I enjoy. Watching.

✓ I enjoy watching it.

原句被错误断句，且缺少宾语。动词“enjoy”后须接动名词作宾语，且需指明宾语。建议合并为“I enjoy watching it”或“I enjoy watching the scenery.”（动名词作宾语，句子完整）

× The river passes by and the mountains.

✓ The river passes by and the mountains pass by too.

原句不完整，第二部分缺谓语。需为“the mountains”补充谓语动词或重写为并列结构，例如“the river and the mountains pass by.”（并列结构完整）

× To. I love taking the photos.

✓ Yes. I love taking photos.

原句首词“To.” 无意义且断裂。应使用简单确认词“Yes”或“I do”，并将“taking the photos”改为更自然的“taking photos”。（删除无意义词并调整惯用表达）

× I prefer mountain mountains to see because of the. View-ucla.

✓ I prefer mountains because of the view.

原句包含重复词“mountain mountains”和杂乱片段“View-ucla”，且定语位置混乱。正确表达为“I prefer mountains because of the view.”，形容词/名词顺序与冠词需正确使用。（去除重复，整理名词短语）

× I can relaxes the mind and cleanse the mind.

✓ I can relax my mind and cleanse it.

动词“relaxes”与情态动词“can”连用时应使用动词原形“relax”；同时“the mind”应改为物主代词“my mind”，避免重复，第二个动词也可用代词“it”。建议改为“I can relax my mind and cleanse it.”（情态动词后用动词原形，代词使用）

× I love the view on top of the mountains. Views like.

✓ I love the view from the top of the mountains, such views are amazing.

原句结尾“Views like.” 不完整，缺谓语和连接词。应扩展为完整表达，例如“such views are amazing”或“views like that are beautiful”。建议将碎片句合并为完整句子以表达赞美之情。（修复残句，补全谓语）