Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接、语法正确并减少口头语。先给出主句说明是否看窗外，然后用一两句具体细节支持（例如何时、为什么觉得放松或注意到什么）。避免时态混乱，并控制在最多5句。可以练习用现在时描述常态。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I find watching the passing scenery relaxing because it helps me unwind after a busy day. For example, I often notice changing landscapes like parks and rivers, which makes the journey more enjoyable.

제안: 减少填充词（uh, um），句子要更简洁、语法正确并使用连接词自然衔接。先简单回答是否拍照，再说明拍照的原因或频率，并举例说明何时会拍（如日出、古建筑）。注意动词形式和时态一致。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window. I enjoy capturing beautiful views when travelling, especially during sunrise or when I pass historic sites. For instance, last month I photographed a colourful sunrise from the car, which turned out very well.

제안: 回答要直接并使用正确比较结构（prefer X to Y），避免拼写错误和冠词、省略句末。给出具体理由和一两个细节支持，例如喜欢徒步、清新空气或安静氛围。保持句子清晰，最多5句。

예시: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy hiking and the fresh, quiet atmosphere. Mountains are often covered with trees and offer peaceful trails, which help me relax. For example, I like spending weekends walking forest paths and enjoying the clean air.

× To see the scenery when I traveling by bus, I think it is a relaxing way, uh, for me when I was on the bus.

✓ To see the scenery when I am travelling by bus, I think it is a relaxing way for me when I am on the bus.

句中“when I traveling”使用了动词ing形式但缺少助动词，应为“when I am travelling”。同时原句中时态不一致，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，故将“was”改为“am”。建议：在进行进行时短语前加上适当的be动词，并保持时态一致。

× Uh, yes, uh, firstly, I like take photo, uh, in my daily life, uh, besides, in addition, uh, when I was traveling, I see the beautiful scenery I eager to take photo to.

✓ Uh, yes. Firstly, I like taking photos in my daily life. Besides, when I am traveling and I see beautiful scenery, I am eager to take photos.

句中“I like take photo”动词后应使用动名词或不定式，常用结构是“like taking photos”。“photo”作可数名词需用复数“photos”。“when I was traveling, I see”时态混用，应保持现在时描述习惯或一般事实，使用“when I am traveling, I see”或更自然的“when I am traveling and I see”。“I eager to take photo to”缺少系动词和不定式标记，且多余介词“to”。建议：使用动名词表示喜好；名词照片用复数；保持时态一致；注意系动词和不定式结构。

× Well, I prefer mountain rather than see because mountain are very tall and surrounded by many green trees. The.

✓ Well, I prefer the mountains to the sea because the mountains are very tall and surrounded by many green trees.

句中“prefer mountain rather than see”搭配错误，正确结构为“prefer A to B”或“prefer A rather than B”。另外“mountain”与“mountain are”名词与动词不一致，应为复数“mountains are”。“see”拼写错误，应为“sea”。句尾多余“The.”删除。建议：使用固定搭配“prefer A to B”，名词复数与谓语一致，注意单词拼写和删除多余词。