Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答应直接且時態一致，避免填充詞（如“MMM”）。先用一個主題句回答問題，再用一兩句具體理由或例子支持。注意語法（例如現在習慣用現在簡單時）和拼寫（sceneries→scenery，attracting→attractive）。可以用連接詞如“because”或“so”使語句更連貫。

예시: Yes, I do. I often look out of the window because I enjoy watching the changing landscapes and small towns we pass. For example, on my last trip I saw a row of traditional houses and a colorful market that caught my attention.

제안: 回答需語法正確並更簡潔。將原因用正確的時態和結構表達（例如 use gerund/infinitive correctly: feel dizzy when I scroll/when the vehicle is moving）。可加一個替代做法作為支持細節，並用連接詞如“so”或“because”。避免冗長或重複。

예시: No, I don't. I often feel dizzy when I look at my phone while the vehicle is moving, so I prefer to enjoy the view with my eyes or rest instead.

제안: 回答應更自然且禮貌，避免自貶語氣（如“I'm too lazy”）。先直接回答偏好，然後給出一兩個具體原因或比較，例如活動難度、風景或放鬆感。修正語法錯誤（standing at the foot, climbing is not interesting）並用連接詞使語意流暢。

예시: I prefer the sea because I find beaches more relaxing and accessible. Unlike hiking, which can be tiring and requires effort to reach the summit, going to the seaside lets me relax, swim and enjoy the view easily.

× Yes I do, I always look out the window when I was traveling by vehicles.

✓ Yes I do. I always look out the window when I travel by vehicle.

原句中使用了过去时态 "was traveling"，但学生说的是习惯性或经常发生的行为，应使用一般现在时。另“by vehicles”用法不自然，常用单数不可数表达为"by vehicle"或更自然地说"when I travel"。建议将动词改为一般现在时，并使用更常见的搭配。

× MMM for the reason that there are always some beautiful sceneries and attracting themes on the road.

✓ Because there are always some beautiful scenes and attractive sights on the road.

“scenery”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“sceneries”。“attracting themes”用法不当，应为形容词+名词，如“attractive sights”更符合英语习惯。开头口语填充词“MMM”在书面回答中删除或改为“Because”。建议记住不可数名词不可复数化，并使用正确形容词形式修饰名词。

× No I don't because I will feel a little bit dizzy when I scrolling through the screen, so most of the time I will not take out my phone when the vehicle was moving.

✓ No, I don't because I feel a little bit dizzy when I scroll through the screen, so most of the time I don't take out my phone when the vehicle is moving.

句中混用了时态："will feel"不适用于一般习惯真相，应使用一般现在时"feel"；"when I scrolling"应为动词原形或进行形式，正确为"when I scroll"或"when I am scrolling"，但与一般事实更常用一般现在时；最后一部分用过去时"was moving"不符合现在习惯，改为现在进行时"is moving"或一般现在时"moves"。建议统一使用适合描述习惯的时态（一般现在时）或在描述正在发生的情况时使用现在进行时。

× I prefer the sea for the reasons that I'm too lazy to climb the mountains, so most of the time I will just stand in the foot of the mountain and I cannot admire the scenery from the top of the mountain.

✓ I prefer the sea because I'm too lazy to climb the mountains, so most of the time I just stand at the foot of the mountain and I cannot admire the scenery from the top.

短语应为“at the foot of the mountain”而不是“in the foot”。此外“for the reasons that”不如简单的“because”自然；“from the top of the mountain”可以简化为“from the top”。建议记住常见介词搭配（at the foot of）并用更自然的连接词。

× So climb the mountains is not interesting for me.

✓ So climbing mountains is not interesting to me.

原句中缺乏正确的非谓语形式：动词不定式或动名词应作主语，常用“climbing mountains”。此外“interesting for me”更常用表达为“interesting to me”。建议用动名词短语作主语并使用习惯搭配“interesting to someone”。