Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện rõ ràng và mạch lạc khi trả lời: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh tiếng ừ/à thừa, dùng liên từ để mở rộng ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: nói rõ tần suất (thường xuyên/hiếm khi), lý do (thư giãn/quan sát địa điểm), và một ví dụ cụ thể về cảnh đã thấy. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu ngắn gọn.

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car or bus. I enjoy seeing the landscape because it helps me relax and gives me a sense of the local area. For example, on a recent trip I watched small villages and rice fields pass by, which was very interesting.

제안: Rõ nghĩa và chính xác hơn khi mô tả thói quen chụp ảnh: dùng từ vựng đúng (photographs/photos, scenery), tránh lặp từ, thêm lý do và một chi tiết cụ thể về kiểu ảnh bạn thích chụp. Kết cấu: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ ngắn. Giữ 2–4 câu.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window. I like capturing interesting sights because photos help me remember trips. For instance, I often photograph long rows of trees or unusual buildings that look striking from the road.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp và phát triển lý do cụ thể: bắt đầu bằng câu khẳng định (“I prefer the sea”), giải thích tại sao (thư giãn, bơi lội, phong cảnh) và nêu thói quen cụ thể (thời gian, địa điểm). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, đại từ) và lặp từ. Giữ 2–4 câu.

예시: I prefer the sea because I find it very relaxing and I enjoy swimming. Every summer I visit the coast near my hometown to relax and spend time with friends, which makes me feel refreshed.

× Yes, as person every, everyone said, um, the destination muttered.

✓ Yes, as everyone says, the destination matters.

The student used incorrect word order and wrong pronouns/phrases. 'As person every' should be 'as everyone' and 'said' should be present 'says' to match general statement. 'The destination muttered' is incorrect verb choice; use 'matters' to express importance. Use present simple for general truths.

× But the journey is also matter.

✓ But the journey also matters.

'Is also matter' is ungrammatical; 'matter' is a verb here so use 'matters'. Keep present simple for general statements.

× So I do usually see the screen, the scenery when you're traveling by the source car to see how it's like, uh, around.

✓ So I usually look at the scenery when I'm traveling by car to see what it is like around.

Problems: adverb placement ('do usually' -> 'usually'), wrong noun 'screen' should be 'scenery', incorrect pronoun/verb forms 'you're traveling' -> 'I'm traveling' because speaker refers to themselves, phrase 'the source car' is incorrect; use 'by car'. 'to see how it's like' should be 'to see what it is like'. Use present continuous 'I'm traveling' for actions in progress.

× Yeah, I usually do that.

✓ Yes, I usually do that.

'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is more appropriate in test context. Sentence is otherwise correct.

× I love folders.

✓ I love photos.

'Folders' is the wrong word; student likely meant 'photos' or 'taking photos'. Replace with 'photos' to match meaning.

× I love to take photos.

✓ I love to take photos.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Expresses habitual preference using infinitive correctly.

× So I usually, uh, take the photo of the screen that I, I think it's pretty like the sensor or a long trees outside of the window.

✓ So I usually take photos of the scenery; I think the sunset or the long trees outside the window are pretty.

Multiple errors: 'take the photo of the screen' -> 'take photos of the scenery'. 'sensor' is likely 'sunset'. 'a long trees' -> 'the long trees' (plural noun agreement and article). Reorder for clarity and use plural agreement 'trees are'.

× I was through the sea.

✓ I grew up near the sea.

'I was through the sea' is ungrammatical and unclear. If the student means they spent childhood by the sea, 'I grew up near the sea' is appropriate. Choose past tense 'grew up' for life history.

× I am a sea lover.

✓ I am a sea lover.

This sentence is correct as a present simple statement of preference; no change needed.

× Uh, every, every sun, uh, every summer I will go to CC to visit the sea and I think it's really fun.

✓ Every summer I go to [CC] to visit the sea, and I think it's really fun.

Errors: 'every sun' is wrong; intended 'every summer'. Use present simple 'I go' for habitual actions instead of 'I will go'. Keep 'every summer' at sentence start and remove fillers for clarity.

× I love to enjoy myself.

✓ I love enjoying myself.

Both 'I love to enjoy myself' and 'I love enjoying myself' are acceptable, but 'I love enjoying myself' sounds more natural. Use gerund for general preference; avoid unnecessary infinitive.