Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one specific supporting detail and a linking word. Avoid vague phrasing like "different situation from my early life" — explain briefly what you mean. Keep the response to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes, such as fields turning into urban streets, which reminds me of how my neighbourhood has changed since I was a child.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear, specific reason using correct vocabulary and linking words. Correct the confusing words (e.g., "universal scenery", "career photo", "moving mobility"). Say whether you ever try, and if not, explain why and offer an alternative action you take instead. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I rarely take photos from a moving car because the images usually come out blurry. Instead, I try to remember the view or take photos when the vehicle stops so I can get a clear picture.

제안: Give a direct preference statement, then provide a specific reason with coherent linking. Avoid unclear words like "progressive" and correct sentence fragments. Mention one or two vivid memories or reasons why the sea appeals to you to strengthen content and naturalness.

예시: I prefer the sea because I grew up near the coast and have many happy memories there. For instance, I used to spend weekends swimming and building sandcastles with my family, so the sea feels relaxing and nostalgic to me.

× Yes, when I traveling I usually enjoy the scenery from the window.

✓ Yes, when I am traveling I usually enjoy the scenery from the window.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense. Use 'I am traveling' to indicate an action in progress or habitual action with 'when'. Suggestion: include the correct form of the verb 'to be' (am/is/are) before the -ing form.

× It shows a different situation from my early life.

✓ It reminds me of how different life was in my early years.

Sentence 'It shows a different situation from my early life' is awkward and unclear. This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. 'Reminds me of how different life was in my early years' is clearer and fits context. Suggestion: use 'reminds me of' and a clearer time expression ('early years').

× No, but sometimes I think if I could take a photo of universal scenery, but it's difficult to take career photo from the moving mobility.

✓ No, but sometimes I wish I could take a photo of the scenery, although it's difficult to take a clear photo from a moving vehicle.

Multiple issues: 'think if I could' is unnatural for wishing (use 'wish I could'); 'universal scenery' and 'career photo' are incorrect word choices; 'moving mobility' is wrong collocation. This involves tense/modal and vocabulary; corrected sentence uses conditional 'wish I could' and appropriate nouns 'clear photo' and 'moving vehicle'. Suggestion: use 'wish' to express unreal desire, 'clear photo' for quality, and 'moving vehicle' as standard term.

× I like progressive, but I prefer the sea because my hometown is nearby the sea and I have a lot of memories.

✓ I like the countryside, but I prefer the sea because my hometown is near the sea and I have a lot of memories there.

'Progressive' is the wrong adjective here; likely intended 'countryside' or 'mountains'. 'Nearby the sea' is incorrect preposition use and article; use 'near the sea' or 'by the sea'. Also add 'there' to indicate memories associated with the place. Suggestion: choose the correct noun for the place and use 'near' or 'by' rather than 'nearby' before a noun.

× All playing in the sea.

✓ We used to play in the sea all the time.

Fragment 'All playing in the sea.' lacks a subject and appropriate verb; it's a sentence structure error. The correction provides a complete past habitual sentence 'We used to play in the sea all the time' which fits the context of memories. Suggestion: include subject and proper verb tense to express past habitual actions.