Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
수험생
Yes I do. I often enjoy looking out of the car window because I like to I like to observe the local scenery and natural landscapes. For example, when I had a long I have the long trip I see the river and.
시험관
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
수험생
Yes I do, I usually take photos especially when the scenery are breathtaking because I want to capture the moment and it help me remember the trip later.
시험관
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
수험생
I prefer the sea because I I like to seeing the blue sky and blue sea. The combination of them were it's really magnificent. I usually take photos see.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
점수: 62.0제안: 答えは直接的で内容も合っていますが、流暢さと正確さ、冗長さの削減、文の完成度を改善する必要があります。具体的には、繰り返し表現（"I like to I like to" や "I had a long I have the long trip"）を避け、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしてください。また、具体的な詳細（いつ、どんな景色を見たか）をもう1つ加え、接続語（for example, and, so）を適切に使って論理的につなげると良いでしょう。発音やリズムも意識して、1文あたり最大5文の範囲に収めてください。
예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy looking out of the car window because I like observing local scenery and natural landscapes. For example, on a long trip last summer I saw a wide river winding through green hills, which looked very peaceful. I often find that watching the scenery helps me relax during the journey.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
점수: 70.0제안: 答えは明確で目的（思い出として残す）が示されていますが、文法の一致（"scenery are"→"scenery is"）と細部の具体化が必要です。接続詞の使い方を整え、理由と効果を短く論理的に述べてください。また、具体的な例（どのような景色を撮るか、どの機器を使うか）を1つ加えると内容が豊かになります。発話は最大5文に収め、自然な語順と語法に注意してください。
예시: Yes, I usually take photos, especially when the scenery is breathtaking, because I want to capture the moment and remember the trip later. For instance, I often photograph dramatic coastlines or colorful sunsets with my smartphone so I can share the views with my family.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
점수: 58.0제안: 答えは好みを示していますが、文法ミス（"I I like to seeing"、"were it's"）や繰り返しが多く、明瞭さに欠けます。まずはシンプルな主題文（I prefer the sea）を述べ、その後に理由を1〜2文で具体的に説明してください。形容詞や語法（"see"→不要）を正しく使い、接続語（because, so, therefore）で論理的に結びましょう。具体的な描写（波、風、匂いなど）や写真を撮る場面の例を加えると良いです。
예시: I prefer the sea because I love seeing the blue sky and the vast ocean together; the view always feels magnificent. I also enjoy the sound of the waves and often take photos of the coastline to remember the peaceful atmosphere.
문법
× Yes I do. I often enjoy looking out of the car window because I like to I like to observe the local scenery and natural landscapes.
✓ Yes I do. I often enjoy looking out of the car window because I like to observe the local scenery and natural landscapes.
重複した不定詞の表現 'I like to I like to' は誤りで、動詞の基本形 'to observe' が適切です。'enjoy' に続く動作を言うときは 'looking' のような -ing 形か 'to' 不定詞のどちらかを一貫して使ってください。また冗長な重複は省いて明確にします。 Suggestion: Remove duplicate phrase and keep either the -ing form or the to-infinitive consistently.
× For example, when I had a long I have the long trip I see the river and.
✓ For example, when I had a long trip I saw the river.
時制が混在しています（'had' と 'have' と現在形 'see' が混ざる）。過去の経験を語っているので過去形で統一し、'see' は過去形の 'saw' にします。また文が途中で切れているため不要な語を削除し、簡潔な文にします。 Suggestion: Use past tense verbs consistently when describing past events.
× Yes I do, I usually take photos especially when the scenery are breathtaking because I want to capture the moment and it help me remember the trip later.
✓ Yes I do. I usually take photos, especially when the scenery is breathtaking, because I want to capture the moment and it helps me remember the trip later.
ここでは複数の誤りがありますが主に前置詞の問題ではなく主語と動詞の一致（'scenery are' → 'scenery is'）と三人称単数の助動詞扱い（'it help' → 'it helps'）が重要です。'scenery' は集合名詞として単数扱いされるため単数動詞を用います。また複数の独立節は句読点で区切ると自然です。 Suggestion: Treat 'scenery' as singular and ensure verb agreement; use commas to separate clauses.
× Yes I do, I usually take photos especially when the scenery are breathtaking because I want to capture the moment and it help me remember the trip later.
✓ Yes I do. I usually take photos, especially when the scenery is breathtaking, because I want to capture the moment and it helps me remember the trip later.
三人称単数の主語に対して動詞は -s を付ける必要があります。'scenery' は単数扱いなので 'is' が正しく、代名詞 'it' に対応する動詞も三人称単数の 'helps' にする必要があります。 Suggestion: For third-person singular subjects, add -s or -es to the verb in present simple.
× I prefer the sea because I I like to seeing the blue sky and blue sea.
✓ I prefer the sea because I like to see the blue sky and blue sea.
動詞の形が不適切です。'like to seeing' は不自然で、'like to see' または 'like seeing' のどちらかを使う必要があります。また 'I I' の重複を削除します。 Suggestion: Use either 'like to + base verb' or 'like + verb-ing', not both together; remove duplicated words.
× The combination of them were it's really magnificent.
✓ The combination of them is really magnificent.
ここでは時制と語順の誤りが混在していますが主要な誤りは動詞の一致（'combination' は単数なので 'is'）と不要な 'were it's' の混同です。'were it's' を取り除き単純な現在形の 'is' を使います。 Suggestion: Use 'combination' as singular with 'is' and avoid inserting contractions or extra verbs that break the sentence.
× I usually take photos see.
✓ I usually take photos.
文構造が不完全で余分な語 'see' が残っています。意図は 'I usually take photos' で完結するため不要語を削除して正しい文にします。 Suggestion: Remove extraneous words and ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb.
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