Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答没有内容。请直接回答问题并给出简短的理由或具体例子，控制在3-5句内。先用一句话表明是否会看窗外景色，然后用1-2句用连词（例如 “because” 或 “so”）补充原因或举例，最后可以加一句对比或个人感受。注意用词自然、贴近场景。

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, on my way to work I like to see the parks and rivers pass by, which helps me relax. Sometimes I take a mental note of interesting places so I can visit them later.

제안: 你的回答缺失。请明确回答是否拍照，并说明频率或理由。用一到两句提供具体情况（例如用手机拍照、只在特殊场合拍），并用连接词（例如 “however” 或 “so”）使语意连贯。避免长篇冗述，保持自然口语风格。

예시: Not usually, because I prefer to enjoy the view without looking at a screen. However, if the scenery is unusual or beautiful — like autumn colours or a dramatic sunset — I will take a quick photo with my phone to remember it.

제안: 没有回答。请在第一句明确表达偏好（mountains or the sea），随后用1-2句说明具体原因，并给出一个短的个人经历或比较来支持你的观点。使用连接词（如 “because”, “so”, “for example”）让回答更有逻辑和流畅度。

예시: I prefer the sea because I love the fresh air and the sound of waves, which helps me relax. For example, when I visit the coast I enjoy walking along the beach and watching boats, whereas mountain trips often feel more strenuous to me.

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✓ I often look out of the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car.

学生未作答（句子缺失谓语或整体缺失），属于句子结构错误。建议用完整句子回答问题，包含主语、谓语和必要的补语。例句提供了常见的回答结构：“I often look out of the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car.” 可根据实际情况调整频率副词（always/often/sometimes/never）。

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✓ Yes, I sometimes take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

学生未作答，导致句子结构不完整。建议使用完整肯定或否定句回答，包含主语和动词。例句用“sometimes”说明频率，并用动词短语“take photos of”准确表达动作。

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✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea because I like hiking and quiet places.

学生未作答，属于句子结构错误。建议用完整句子直接回答比较偏好，并用“prefer A to B”结构表达偏好，后面可加原因或举例以扩展回答。