Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接和简洁，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复信息。可以用一到两句表明观点，再用一两句提供具体原因或细节。例如把“always”与过去或现在状况区分清楚，修正语法错误并使用连接词使语流更自然。

예시: I usually don't look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I often feel tired and get headaches. So I prefer to sleep during the journey; that helps me relax and arrive feeling better.

제안: 回答应更流畅并修正语法错误，避免口语填充词过多。提供具体例子或说明会更有说服力；使用连接词（for one thing, and for another）组织原因，注意动词形式和词汇搭配。

예시: I don't usually take photos from the car window. For one thing, I often get headaches when I travel, and for another, I don't feel confident in my photography skills, so I prefer to enjoy the view rather than try to photograph it.

제안: 回答要注意语法（时态、词序、动词形式）和句子连贯性。先给出直接答案，然后用一到两句具体说明原因或举例，避免碎片化表达并使用连接词。描述经历时注意事件时态和自然表达。

예시: I prefer the sea because I love being near water and I enjoy swimming. Last summer my best friend Sarah and I went to the seaside; we spent time sunbathing and swimming, which made the trip unforgettable.

× No I never look out the window because when I travel by bus I always feel so tired and my head always had a headache so I always sleep on the bus or car.

✓ No. I never look out the window because when I travel by bus I always feel so tired and my head always has a headache, so I always sleep on the bus or in the car.

句中出现时态与表达不一致：用一般现在时描述习惯动作（travel, feel, sleep），但短语“had a headache”使用了过去式，应改为“一般现在时 has”；此外“on the bus or car”中“car”前缺少介词，应为“in the car”。建议统一使用一般现在时描述习惯，并注意介词搭配。

× Well, I don't take photos of the scenery. On one hand, I often feel headache when I traveling by bus or car.

✓ Well, I don't take photos of the scenery. On one hand, I often have a headache when I travel by bus or by car.

“when I traveling”中动词形式错误，after 'when' 应用完整主谓结构，故用一般现在时 travel；另外英语中习惯说 'have a headache' 而不是 'feel headache'。建议使用 'have a headache' 并保持一般现在时。

× Another reason is my photo skill is so poor that I cannot take the beautiful pictures, so I don't want to.

✓ Another reason is that my photography skills are so poor that I cannot take beautiful pictures, so I don't want to.

句中表达不自然且名词和代词使用不当：应使用复数 'photography skills' 或 'photo skills' 表示技能；另外从句前缺少连词 'that'，且 'take the beautiful pictures' 中定冠词 'the' 不合适，改为不定或无冠词 'beautiful pictures'。最后 'so I don't want to' 不完整，建议保留或补全为 'so I don't want to take photos.' 建议改善词汇搭配和句子完整性。

× Well, I prefer the sea because I love the water and I always swimming in the pool.

✓ Well, I prefer the sea because I love the water and I always swim in the pool.

“I always swimming” 中动词形式错误，应在 'always' 后使用动词原形 'swim'（一般现在时）来表示经常性动作。建议使用一般现在时 'always + 动词原形' 的结构。

× Last summer I and my best friend Sarah take a travel to the sea.

✓ Last summer my best friend Sarah and I took a trip to the sea.

这是过去发生的动作，应使用过去式 'took' 而不是 'take'；另外英语中人称顺序习惯把自己放在最后，故改为 'my best friend Sarah and I'；'take a travel' 是不自然的搭配，应使用 'took a trip' 或 'went on a trip'。建议使用正确的过去式和自然短语搭配。

× We enjoy the sunshine and with meaning together.

✓ We enjoyed the sunshine and meaningful moments together.

原句结构混乱且语法不正确：'enjoy' 在描述过去经历时应为过去式 'enjoyed'；'with meaning together' 不是英语常用表达，应改为 'meaningful moments together' 或 'shared meaningful experiences'。建议调整为自然表达并保持时态一致。

× It's very unforgettable time.

✓ It was a very unforgettable time.

描述过去的经历应使用过去时，故 'It's'（it is）应改为 'It was'。此外 'unforgettable' 本身含义为难忘的，前置不定冠词 'a' 可保留：'a very unforgettable time' 虽然冗余但可接受；更自然的是 'It was an unforgettable time.' 建议使用过去时并考虑更自然的搭配。