Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunları var. Konuya doğrudan başlıyorsunuz, ancak cümlelerde yanlış fiil kullanımı (ör. “look the scenery”, “take picture”, “weave”) ve fazla tekrar bulunuyor. Geliştirmek için: 1) Doğru fiil kalıplarını kullanın (“look at the scenery”, “take pictures of landscapes”); 2) Gereksiz tekrarları azaltın; 3) Birkaç destekleyici ayrıntı eklerken bağlaç kullanın (for example, because, so) ve cümle sayısını 3–4 ile sınırlayın; 4) Konu ile ilgili daha spesifik örnekler verin (hangi tür manzaralar, hangi mevsimlerde).

예시: Yes, I usually look at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because I find it relaxing. For example, I often photograph natural landscapes such as forests and rivers, especially in autumn when the colours are vivid. I prefer these quiet moments because they help me unwind and notice small details I would otherwise miss.

제안: Cevap amaca uygun fakat tamamlanmamış ve anlam eksikliği var. Cümleler kısa ve bağlaç eksikliği yüzünden karışık duruyor. Geliştirmek için: 1) Tam ve tutarlı cümleler kurun; 2) Bağlaçlar kullanarak neden ve nasıl paylaştığınızı açıklayın (for example, so that, because); 3) Sosyal medya ve albümler hakkında daha spesifik bilgi verin (hangi platform, hangi tür hikâyeler).

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window and sometimes record short videos for social media. I usually post them on Instagram stories so my friends can see where I travel. For instance, I create small albums of rivers and forests to remember peaceful trips and share moments with others.

제안: Cevap net ama dil bilgisi hataları ve ifade eksiklikleri var. Geliştirmek için: 1) Konuyu doğrudan belirten kısa bir giriş cümlesi kullanın; 2) Nedenleri bağlaçlarla açıklayın (because, so); 3) Daha spesifik nedenler ve örnekler ekleyin (ör. yürüyüş, sessizlik, hava).

예시: I prefer the mountains because they offer peace and solitude. For example, I enjoy hiking on quiet trails and listening to birds, which helps me relax after a busy week. The fresh air and calm environment make mountains my favourite choice.

× Yes, I always look the scenery when I travel somewhere and I take picture of landscape.

✓ Yes, I always look at the scenery when I travel somewhere and I take pictures of landscapes.

The verb 'look' needs the preposition 'at' to form the phrasal verb 'look at'. 'Take picture' requires plural 'take pictures' for habitual actions or countable nouns, and 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match general reference. Suggestion: use 'look at' and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I prefer take picture of natural landscape like weave or river.

✓ I prefer to take pictures of natural landscapes like waves or rivers.

After 'prefer' when followed by a verb, use the to-infinitive 'to take' (or the -ing form but maintain consistency). 'Picture' and 'landscape' should be plural for general statements. 'Weave' is a wrong word here; the correct noun is 'waves' for the sea. Use 'rivers' plural. Suggestion: use 'prefer to take pictures of natural landscapes such as waves or rivers.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× Uh, it's peaceful moment for me.

✓ Uh, it's a peaceful moment for me.

The noun 'moment' requires an article 'a' when singular and countable. Without it the sentence is ungrammatical. Suggestion: add the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I always take picture of scenery sometimes I take a video for my social media.

✓ Yes, I always take pictures of the scenery; sometimes I take a video for my social media.

'Take picture' should be 'take pictures' for habitual actions and 'scenery' often requires 'the' when specific (the outside view). Also the sentence needs punctuation or a conjunction to separate clauses. Suggestion: pluralize and add 'the' and separate clauses with a semicolon or conjunction. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I have story albums to share my picture or videos when I go to nature because when I stay nature I.

✓ I have story albums to share my pictures or videos when I go to nature because when I stay in nature I relax.

Multiple errors: 'picture or videos' should be 'pictures or videos' (plural agreement). 'Go to nature' and 'stay nature' are incorrect preposition use; correct is 'go to nature' can be 'go to nature' but more natural is 'go into nature' or 'go to natural places'; 'stay in nature' needs preposition 'in'. The clause ends incomplete; 'I' needs a verb—likely 'relax'. Suggestion: use 'stay in nature' and finish the thought with a verb like 'relax'. Grammar problem type ID:26},{