Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical and vocabulary errors. Aim to give a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two supporting details. Use simple, correct grammar and relevant vocabulary (e.g., "look out the window," "scenery," "relaxing"). Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if you add a reason (e.g., "because").

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the passing scenery. For example, I like seeing fields and small villages, which helps me relax during the journey.

제안: Your one-word answer does not address the question. Start with a clear yes/no response, then give a brief reason or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to expand. Keep sentences simple and specific (e.g., when you take photos and why).

예시: Sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when the view is striking. For example, I will photograph a colourful sunset or an interesting building because I want to remember the moment.

제안: Your answer is confusing and mixes topics (seafood vs. sea). Clearly state your preference (mountains or the sea) in the first sentence, then give a reason with specific details. Use linking words such as "because" or "so". Avoid unrelated vocabulary and keep responses concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: I prefer the sea because I find the sound of waves very relaxing and I enjoy swimming. For instance, I often go to the beach to unwind and listen to the ocean, which helps me feel calm.

× Yes, I often look half of the law when she away or can become an in the train.

✓ Yes, I often look out of the window at the scenery when I am away or when I travel by train.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and pronoun problems: 'look half of the law' is meaningless and likely intended 'look out of the window'; 'she away' uses wrong pronoun and lacks a verb and subject agreement; 'can become an in the train' is ungrammatical. I corrected to a clear, complete sentence that fits the question by using the correct verb phrase 'look out of the window', correct subject 'I', and present continuous 'am' for 'when I am away' or simple present 'travel' for habitual action. Suggestion: simplify the idea into one clear clause per meaning and use correct subjects and verbs. Identify as ID 26.

× Beautiful.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos when I see something beautiful outside the car window.

A single-word answer 'Beautiful.' is not a complete sentence and does not directly answer the question. I expanded it to a full sentence that fits the question about taking photos, using present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: answer directly and use a subject and verb to form a complete sentence. Identify as ID 26.

× I like the seafood is a beautiful relax and chill.

✓ I prefer the sea because it is beautiful and relaxing.

The original mixes nouns and phrases incorrectly: 'I like the seafood' (seafood means edible sea products) is not relevant to preferring the sea as a place; 'is a beautiful relax and chill' is ungrammatical—'relax' is a verb and 'chill' is informal. I corrected 'seafood' to 'the sea', used 'prefer' to match the question, and used the adjective 'relaxing' and conjunction 'because' to give a reason. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('sea' not 'seafood'), use appropriate adjectives (relaxing) and complete clause structure. Identify as ID 13 and 26.