Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意表达的清晰性和用词准确性。回答应先直接回答问题（Yes/No），然后用1–2句具体原因或例子支持。避免模糊或错误的短语（如 “snap on January”, “along the lot”）。保持句子简洁，最多5句，并使用恰当的连接词如 “because”, “so” 来保持连贯。

예시: Yes, I do. I used to enjoy looking out of the window because I like watching changing scenery and small towns along the route, but recently I often look at my phone because my commute is long and I want to save energy for work.

제안: 回答总体较好，但注意避免重复（如 “beautiful” 多次出现）并提高细节的具体性。可以用连接词（for instance, such as）来引出例子，并给出一两个具体场景或频率细节，使内容更丰富同时不超出句子数限制。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside because it helps me remember special moments. For instance, I frequently photograph mountain ranges and rivers when I travel so I can look back at the views later.

제안: 回答清晰但有个别用词错误（如 “savory sea beaches” 不自然），注意主谓一致（“which help”→“which helps”）。可以先给出直接答案，然后用一两个具体原因或活动支撑，用连接词如 “because” 和 “for example”。

예시: I prefer the sea because I live near several beaches, so it's easy to visit. For example, I often walk along the shore and watch the sunrise there, which helps me relax.

× Actually, I used to like enjoying looking out of the window when traveling because I like watching the changing scenery and the small town along the lot.

✓ Actually, I used to enjoy looking out of the window when traveling because I like watching the changing scenery and the small towns along the route.

错误类型：动词后接 -ing (以及复数与词搭配)。说明：短语“used to like enjoying looking”中不需要同时使用like和enjoying，动词like或enjoy之后都接动名词，但两者连用冗余。建议改为“used to enjoy/look”之一。此外“the small town along the lot”不自然，需改为复数“small towns”并用更合适的名词“route”或“road”。改进建议：简化动词搭配（used to enjoy/look），并用复数与合适名词表达多处小镇。

× But nowadays I prefer to snap on January since my commute time is long and I need to save my energy for work.

✓ But nowadays I prefer to nap in January since my commute time is long and I need to save my energy for work.

错误类型：句子结构/词语选择错误。说明：原句“prefer to snap on January”中snap是“拍照”或“抓住”的意思，语境应为“打盹”，应使用nap，并且介词要用in表示月份。建议：将snap改为nap，on January改为 in January。若意图是指“现在我更喜欢在旅途中打盹”，也可删去具体月份用“on the way”或“during the trip”。

× I often take photos of the beautiful scenery outside the car window because it is an easy way for me to recall the beautiful landscape and the the special moments.

✓ I often take photos of the beautiful scenery outside the car window because it is an easy way for me to recall the beautiful landscape and the special moments.

错误类型：冠词/重复词错误。说明：句中有重复词“the the”。此外句子中使用冠词“the special moments”是可以的，但注意不要重复。建议：删除重复词并检查全文避免重复。

× For example, I often photograph mountains and rivers so I can look back later.

✓ For example, I often photograph mountains and rivers so that I can look back later.

错误类型：现在分词/连词使用。说明：原句“so I can look back later”语法上可接受，但在正式书面语中常用“so that”引导目的状语从句以更清晰地表达目的。建议：在表示目的时使用“so that”。（此句错误较轻，可视为风格改进。）

× Actually, I prefer the sea because the city where I live is close to savory sea beaches, so it is very convenient for me to enjoy the seaside scenery.

✓ Actually, I prefer the sea because the city where I live is close to sandy sea beaches, so it is very convenient for me to enjoy the seaside scenery.

错误类型：形容词使用不当。说明：原句使用“savory”来修饰海滩不合适，savory表示“可口的、辛辣的”，通常用于食物。描述海滩应使用“sandy”（有沙的）或“beautiful”。建议：将savory改为sandy或其他合适形容词。

× For example, I often go to the beach to watch the sunrise and take a walk along the beach, which help me relax.

✓ For example, I often go to the beach to watch the sunrise and take a walk along the beach, which helps me relax.

错误类型：主谓一致错误。说明：关系代词which指代前面的整个短语或名词，后面的动词应与其单数或短语一致，这里用“helps”而不是“help”。建议：将动词改为第三人称单数形式helps以保证主谓一致。