Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接并使用正确的句子结构，避免重复和无关词（如“oh”，“may it may”）。可以先给出主题句说明是否看窗外，然后用一到两句具体细节支持（例如你喜欢看什么类型的景色、什么时候最喜欢看）。注意语法（主谓一致、名词单复数）和词汇搭配（“scenery outside”而不是“different scenery outside”重复）。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing countryside farms and small villages because they are very different from my city surroundings.

제안: 回答内容基本明确，但要更加简洁清楚，避免填充词（umm, maybe）。先用一句话直接回答，然后用一至两句具体原因或例子支持，注意时态和表达自然性。可以提到拍照的目的或怎样拍（例如用手机、抓拍）。

예시: Yes, sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside because it changes quickly and I don't want to forget interesting views. I usually use my phone to capture fast-moving scenes like passing fields or colourful buildings.

제안: 回答不清晰且含有错误代词和混乱表述。首先明确偏好（mountains or the sea），然後给出具体理由或比较。避免模糊词如“maybe”过多，并修正代词错误（不要用“she”指代海/山）。可以提到童年经验、活动或景观特点来支持观点。

예시: I prefer the sea because I find the open horizon and waves relaxing, and I enjoy swimming and walking on the beach. Although I grew up near mountains, the sea feels more peaceful and different from my everyday environment.

× Yeah, I would like to do so because I think this can see many different scenery outside and I can see many, oh, sometimes may it may be special and different from Windows Phone of the Home or Dominique.

✓ Yeah, I would like to do so because I think I can see many different scenes outside, and sometimes they may be special and different from what I'm used to at home.

句子中存在动词 + -ing 相关和句子结构混乱的问题（应归入“动词 + -ing form”类别，因为原句用法不当并有非谓语动词和结构缺失）。原句“This can see many different scenery”中主语与谓语不匹配，应使用“I can see”而不是“this can see”；“scenery”常作不可数名词，但此处指多种不同的景象，改为复数“scenes”更自然。句中“may it may be”是口语重复，应删去一个，并用完整从句“different from what I'm used to at home”来表达“与家里的不同”的意思。改进建议：说完整的主谓结构（I can see ...），选择可数或不可数名词时根据语境使用“scene(s)”或“scenery”，避免口语重复，使用清晰的比较从句。

× Yep, sometimes I like to do so because umm, I think some scenery is passing fast and if I don't take photos maybe the next time I will have got it so I will take photos of the scenery outside.

✓ Yep, sometimes I like to do so because I think some scenery passes by quickly, and if I don't take photos I might not get another chance, so I take photos of the scenery outside.

原句“There is passing fast”和“will have got it”时态和非谓语动词使用不当，属于过去分词/完成时相关问题类别。应使用一般现在时或现在完成时表达习惯性动作或可能的结果。把“some scenery is passing fast”改为“some scenery passes by quickly”更符合英语表达；“will have got it”不自然，改为“might not get another chance”更清楚地表达“可能没有下一次机会”。改进建议：使用与情境匹配的时态（习惯或普遍事实用一般现在时），避免直接翻译母语结构，使用自然的英语完成或情态表达可能性（might/could）。

× Maybe I prefer to see because I think she is white and it OK. I think it's beautiful because in my home there are many mountains. Maybe I will think mountain is not a special scenery.

✓ Maybe I prefer the mountains because I think they are majestic and beautiful. At home there are many mountains, so I don't think mountains are especially special scenery.

原句存在现在时和代词使用问题（如用“she”指代山、不当的时态“will think”），主要属于现在时问题类别。应把单数/代词和时态统一：mountains 应与复数代词“they”搭配；描述习惯或观点用一般现在时而不是“will think”。此外“she is white and it OK”语义不明，改为“they are majestic and beautiful（雄伟而美丽）”更自然。改进建议：注意名词单复数一致并使用正确代词，表达习惯性观点用一般现在时，避免使用性别代词指代无生命体。