Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cümle yapılarına ve dilbilgisine dikkat et. Kısa cümleler kullanırken özne-fiil uyumunu düzeltin (ör. “lookout” yerine “look out” ve “this was. So special to me” hatalarını giderin). Cevabınızı doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak akışı iyileştirin. Örnek: neden özellikle araba yolculuklarını sevdiğinizi ve çocukken bunun neden özel olduğunu kısa bir açıklama ile belirtin.

예시: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by car because the view feels more personal and relaxed. For example, when I was a child I used to watch the changing landscapes for hours, which made long trips feel exciting and memorable.

제안: Cümleleri akıcı ve doğru biçimde tamamlayın; gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından kaçının (ör. “always it is special to me” yerine “it always feels special to me”). Bir neden verin ve bir örnekle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, for example, so) kullanarak mantıksal akış sağlayın. Ayrıca son cümleyi eksik bırakmamaya dikkat edin.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window because it always feels special to capture those fleeting moments. For example, I once photographed a beautiful sunset over a lake while driving home, and that picture still reminds me of the trip.

제안: Daha doğal ve mantıklı bir açıklama verin; çelişkili ifadelerden kaçının (ör. “I have never been in the mountains, but I don't want to actually” kafa karıştırıcı). Tercihinizi belirleyen nedenleri ekleyin (manzara, aktiviteler, anılar vb.) ve cümlenizi bağlaçlarla genişletin. Ayrıca “actually” gibi gereksiz sözcükleri dikkatli kullanın.

예시: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the sound of waves and the relaxed atmosphere. Although I haven't visited the mountains, I'm more drawn to beaches for swimming and watching sunsets, which makes seaside trips more appealing to me.

× Yes I do, I love lookout the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car, especially car.

✓ Yes, I do. I love looking out of the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car, especially by car.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the -ing form 'looking' (verb + -ing form). 'Lookout' is incorrect here; the correct phrasal verb is 'look out (of) the window' or 'look out of the window'. Also use 'by car' to indicate the mode of travel. Suggestion: use 'I love looking out of the window' and include commas for clarity.

× When I was a kid this was. So special to me.

✓ When I was a kid, this was so special to me.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly split. Combine clauses into a single coherent sentence and use commas appropriately. Suggestion: write 'When I was a kid, this was so special to me.' to form a complete sentence.

× Yes I do. I love taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because always it is special to me.

✓ Yes, I do. I love taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because it is always special to me.

Use 'taking' (verb + -ing) after 'love'. The adverb 'always' should be placed before the verb phrase 'is' or after the subject: 'it is always special to me'. Suggestion: place adverbs in a natural position: 'it is always special to me.'

× Maybe it's my passion taking photos of the scenery outside the car and.

✓ Maybe it's my passion to take photos of the scenery outside the car.

The original sentence ends with an unnecessary 'and' and uses a gerund without correct structure. Use 'to take' after 'my passion' or 'my passion is taking...' Suggestion: choose 'Maybe it's my passion to take photos...' or 'Maybe my passion is taking photos...'. Remove the trailing 'and'.

× I prefer the sea. I have never been in the mountains, but I don't want to actually.

✓ I prefer the sea. I have never been to the mountains, and I don't want to go there actually.

Use the correct preposition 'to' with 'been' (been to a place). The phrase 'I don't want to actually' is incomplete; add the verb 'go there' to complete the thought. Also using 'and' connects the ideas naturally. Suggestion: 'I have never been to the mountains, and I don't want to go there, actually.'

× But the sea is special for me.

✓ But the sea is special to me.

Use the correct prepositional phrase 'special to me' rather than 'special for me'. The adverb 'but' at the start is acceptable in spoken English; keep punctuation consistent. Suggestion: 'The sea is special to me.'