Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接并保持时态一致。开头应有清晰的主题句，然后用1-2句具体细节支持。注意时态（现在习惯用一般现在时），并纠正语法错误与多余短语。例如“I'm so excited to the after the travel”语法错误且意义不明。可以加入连接词来让句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the car window because the scenery helps me relax. For example, when I travel through the countryside I enjoy watching green fields and small villages, which makes the journey peaceful.

제안: 回答应使用正确时态并提高细节的准确性。保持句子连贯，避免不相关或模糊的描述（如“The climb is very comfortable”不清楚指什么）。提供具体地点、时间和所拍内容的细节，并用连接词衔接。

예시: Yes, I often take photos from the car window. For example, last week I visited Yunnan and I photographed terraced fields and mountain villages because the landscape there is very different from my hometown.

제안: 回答要简洁并说明具体原因，注意固定表达与语序（如“the south of China”）。避免重复（不需要两次说“prefer the mountains better”）。可以补充具体对山的偏好理由并用连接词加强逻辑。

예시: I prefer the mountains because I grew up near the sea, so I want a different experience. For instance, mountain air and hiking trails relax me more than crowded beaches.

× Yes, I usually look out the window at the scenery when traveling by car because it made me feel relaxed when I watched the beautiful view. I'm so excited to the after the travel.

✓ Yes, I usually look out the window at the scenery when traveling by car because it makes me feel relaxed when I watch the beautiful view. I'm so excited after the trip.

存在现在时使用不当和词语搭配错误。原句中主句用现在习惯性动作（usually, look, traveling），但从句用了过去时态“made”和“watched”，时态不一致，应使用一般现在时“makes”和“watch”。另外“so excited to the after the travel”结构不正确，改为常用表达“excited after the trip”。建议：保持句子时态一致（习惯性动作用一般现在时），并使用地道短语（e.g. after the trip）。

× Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside the car windows. For example, last week I go to Yunnan.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside the car window. For example, last week I went to Yunnan.

“car windows”在此语境下通常指单一交通工具的一侧景色，用单数“car window”更自然（也可为复数视具体语境，但考试口语更常用单数）。同时第二句中“go”应为过去时“went”，因为提到的是上周发生的事情。建议：描述一般习惯可用单数短语，叙述过去事件用一般过去时。

× The climb is very comfortable. I took many photos in the car because the view is very different between my hometown.

✓ The climb was very comfortable. I took many photos in the car because the view was very different from my hometown.

句中谈及已发生的旅行，应使用过去时，所以“The climb is”改为“The climb was”。此外“different between my hometown”搭配错误，表示差异通常用“different from”。建议：描述过去事件统一使用过去时，并使用正确介词短语“different from”。

× Actually I like the mountains better because I live in the South way of the China. There are lots of seas in near my home so I prefer the mountains better.

✓ Actually I like the mountains better because I live in the south of China. There are lots of seas near my home, so I prefer the mountains.

“the South way of the China”是错误的介词和词序，应为“the south of China”（中国的南部）。“in near my home”应为“near my home”。另外汉语里英语避免重复使用“better”两次，最后一句“prefer the mountains”已表示偏好，无需再加“better”。建议：注意固定介词短语（south of）、介词位置（near my home）及避免多余比较词。