Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，未给出任何实质内容。要直接回答并尽量在一到两句内给出理由或具体例子。注意句子自然、简明，最多五句。尝试使用连接词（例如because, so, although）来让答案更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, on my last trip I watched fields and small villages pass by, which helped me relax.

제안: 再次只是重复问题，未提供回答或细节。要明确回答（Yes/No），并给出原因或具体例子来支持观点。注意不要脱离主题或过度重复考官的话。

예시: Sometimes I take photos from the car window, especially when I see something unusual like a colourful sunset or interesting buildings. However, I avoid it when driving fast because the pictures would be blurry.

제안: 你的回答仍然是复述问题，没有表达个人偏好或原因。应直接说明偏好并提供具体原因、比较或相关经历，以显示语言组织能力。使用一到三个支持句即可。

예시: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and the relaxed atmosphere. The sound of waves helps me feel calm, whereas I find mountain hikes more tiring.

× Do you look out the windows at the scenery when traveling by bus or car?

✓ Do you look out of the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?

原句中的“the windows”与考官问题“window”不一致，考官原题用單數“the window”，通常指车窗或一侧的窗。要保持与提问一致并更自然，改为单数“the window”或更常用的短语“look out of the window”。另外英式拼写为“travelling”，美式为“traveling”，应与考试要求或其他句子保持一致。建议：注意题干单复数形式的使用，确保主语/对象的一致性，必要时使用固定搭配“look out of the window”。

× Do you take photos of the scenery outside the side windows?

✓ Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

原句使用“side windows”显得多余且与考官提问不完全一致。考官问“the scenery outside the car window”，更自然和常见的表达是“the car window”或“the window”。此外“outside the side windows”结构不够地道。建议：跟随题干用法，使用单数短语“the car window”或更通用的“the window”；如果确实指“侧窗”，可说“the side window”。

× Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?

✓ Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?

该句与考官问题完全一致，无明显语法错误。两项并列为可数名词复数形式（mountains）和不可数/集合名词（sea）均正确，无需修改。建议：保持原句即可。