Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural, relevant and well-structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve to a higher band, make your response slightly more concise (avoid minor redundancy) and add one specific example or brief reason to deepen the content. Also use a linking word to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually sit by the window on buses or in cars because I enjoy watching the passing countryside and cityscapes. For example, last month I saw a field of sunflowers that I photographed, which made the journey feel relaxing and refreshing. Therefore, looking out the window helps me unwind and notice interesting details.

제안: Strong, descriptive answer with specific reasons and activities. To improve further, tighten phrasing to avoid small redundancies and add a linking word to join sentences. You could also mention one concrete effect of editing or how you choose photos to give more depth.

예시: Yes, I often photograph scenery from the car, especially at sunset because the low light makes rivers and the sea sparkle and the sky turns dramatic. For instance, I captured an orange-hued coastline last week and later edited the contrast slightly before posting it online, which made the image more striking.

제안: Clear, well-justified preference with specific comparisons and examples — very effective. To reach an even higher score, add a short personal anecdote or one concise linking phrase to show contrast more fluidly, and avoid slightly absolute language like “always” or “mostly” without qualification.

예시: I prefer the sea, particularly for photography, because it provides changing light and varied subjects. For example, while hiking in the mountains last year the views felt uniform, but on a coastal shoot I photographed waves, reflections and boats at different times of day, which gave me many creative options.

× I usually sit by the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the passing countryside and cityscapes.

✓ I usually sit by the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the passing countryside and cityscapes.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not exhibit any of the problems listed in the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List. Tenses, subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions and word order are all appropriate.

× I often take photos of interesting scenes and breathe in the fresh air.

✓ I often take photos of interesting scenes and breathe in the fresh air.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not match any error types from the provided list. Both verbs are correctly coordinated and tense usage is consistent.

× It helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable.

✓ It helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable.

Sentence structure, subject-verb agreement and verb forms are correct; no listed grammar problems apply.

× Yes, I especially like taking photos at sunset because the low light makes the sea or river sparkle and the sky looks dramatic with the orange tones, so those moments always catch my eye.

✓ Yes, I especially like taking photos at sunset because the low light makes the sea or river sparkle and the sky looks dramatic with the orange tones, so those moments always catch my eye.

This complex sentence is grammatically correct: verb forms, conjunctions and prepositions are appropriate and match the question context.

× I also enjoy photographing lush greenery and colorful flowers when I spot them from the car, and I sometimes edit these pictures later to post on my social media.

✓ I also enjoy photographing lush greenery and colorful flowers when I spot them from the car, and I sometimes edit these pictures later to post on my social media.

No grammar issues from the provided list are present. The sentence uses correct verb forms, prepositions and coordination.

× I prefer the sea, especially for taking photographs, because it offers more varied angles and changing light than the mountains.

✓ I prefer the sea, especially for taking photographs, because it offers more varied angles and changing light than the mountains.

This sentence is grammatically correct: comparative structure, verb agreement and article usage are appropriate for the context.

× In the mountains, the scenery can sometimes become monotonous, mostly green or brown, whereas at the seaside you can photograph waves, reflections, boats and dramatic skies, which gives you more creative options.

✓ In the mountains, the scenery can sometimes become monotonous, mostly green or brown, whereas at the seaside you can photograph waves, reflections, boats and dramatic skies, which gives you more creative options.

The sentence is grammatically correct and matches the intended meaning. Clauses, pronouns and verb forms are properly used.