Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, ngắn gọn hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp; bổ sung liên từ hợp lý và chi tiết cụ thể về lý do (ví dụ: chuyển động gây buồn nôn). Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồ ừ; dùng tối đa 3-4 câu. Ví dụ cụ thể: khi nào và trong hoàn cảnh nào bạn cảm thấy chóng mặt, bạn làm gì để giảm triệu chứng.

예시: I usually don’t look out of the window when I travel by car or bus because I get motion sick. Therefore, I often close my eyes or sleep to avoid feeling dizzy. For example, on long bus rides I prefer to rest rather than watch the scenery.

제안: Câu trả lời đã rõ ràng nhưng nên thêm liên từ để mạch lạc và một ví dụ cụ thể để làm nội dung phong phú hơn. Sửa chút cấu trúc để tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp ý. Giữ 2-3 câu tối đa.

예시: No, I don’t usually take photos from the car window because I often feel uncomfortable and prefer to rest. For instance, on overnight trips I usually sleep instead of trying to take pictures through a moving window.

제안: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng cần rút bớt tiếng ồ ừ và sửa lỗi số nhiều/số ít (sea, mountains). Nên mở rộng thêm một câu giải thích cụ thể về lý do (ví dụ: cảm giác thư giãn, hoạt động yêu thích) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Giữ không quá 3 câu.

예시: I like both mountains and the sea, but if I have to choose I prefer the sea because I enjoy sunbathing and walking along the shore. The seaside makes me feel relaxed and energized after a busy week.

× Actually, I usually don't look out the window when I traveling by bus or car because I I feel dizzy so I often sleep uh to avoid sickness.

✓ Actually, I usually don't look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I feel dizzy, so I often sleep to avoid motion sickness.

Error type: Present tense issue (ID 6). The verb 'traveling' is a present participle but the sentence requires the base form 'travel' after the auxiliary 'do' in negative present simple. Also there are small redundancy and word choice issues: double 'I', 'uh', and 'sickness' should be 'motion sickness' for clarity. Suggestion: Use the base verb after do/does in present simple (do + base form), remove filler words and duplicates, and use the correct collocation 'motion sickness'.

× I think it's make me feel better.

✓ I think it makes me feel better.

Error type: Subject-verb agreement errors (ID 27). The subject 'it' (third person singular) requires the verb 'make' to be changed to 'makes' in the present simple. Suggestion: For third person singular subjects, add -s/-es to the base verb in present simple.

× I usually don't take photos from the car window because I feel uncomfortable and tend to fall asleep during the journey.

✓ I usually don't take photos from the car window because I feel uncomfortable and tend to fall asleep during the journey.

No correction needed for grammar list items. The sentence correctly uses verb forms and structure. Explanation: The verbs 'take', 'feel', and the infinitive phrase 'to fall asleep' are appropriate for the meaning and the present habitual context. Suggestion: Sentence is fine as is.

× Actually, I like both the mountain and the seas, but, uh, if I have to choose, maybe I prefer the sea because, uh, I like working on the seashore and sunbathing.

✓ Actually, I like both the mountains and the sea, but if I have to choose, maybe I prefer the sea because I like working on the seashore and sunbathing.

Error type: Singular and plural issue (ID 1). 'the mountain and the seas' mixes singular and plural forms awkwardly and is inconsistent. More natural is 'the mountains and the sea' when comparing both types of landscape. Also remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure and consistent number when listing items: use plural 'mountains' and singular 'sea' as common collocations.