Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., "when I travel", "the scenery", "the fresh air"). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus, car or train because I enjoy the scenery. For example, I like to watch trees and hills pass by, and I appreciate the fresh, cool air when windows are open.

제안: Give a clear short answer followed by specific reasons and a brief example. Improve vocabulary and sentence structure (e.g., "nature lover", "landscapes"). Use linking words such as "because" or "for example" to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like "as I see" and "kind of like".

예시: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I am a nature lover and enjoy capturing landscapes. For example, I like to photograph forests and rivers to remember the view and share it with friends.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Fix grammar: use "both", "I like both", "I prefer the mountains", and correct noun forms (e.g., "there is so much nature", "go to the mountains"). Keep it concise and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy peaceful hiking and the variety of plants and wildlife. For example, I love walking forest trails and looking at different trees and flowers, which I find more relaxing than busy beaches.

× Yes, I do look out the window at the scenery when I traveling by bus, car or train because I like to enjoy nature trees and also I like to feel air like a cold air. So yes I like to look out the windows when I travel by first car or train.

✓ Yes, I do look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling by bus, car, or train because I like to enjoy the trees and feel the air, especially cold air. So yes, I like to look out the windows when I travel by car or train.

The clause 'when I traveling' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous form; use 'when I am traveling'. Also 'nature trees' is incorrect word order and collocation; use 'the trees' or 'nature' separately. 'Feel air like a cold air' is ungrammatical; say 'feel the air, especially cold air'. 'First car or train' is unclear and likely incorrect; use 'car or train'. Suggestions: include the appropriate auxiliary for present participle verbs, use correct article/noun collocation, and simplify phrasing for clarity.

× Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car windows because as I see, I like nature views, kind of like trees, fresh air, different kinds of nature. I am a nature level so I like to take photos of different landscape of scenery.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I like natural views, such as trees, fresh air, and different kinds of landscapes. I am a nature lover, so I like to take photos of different landscapes.

Errors: 'car windows' can be singular 'car window' when referring to the view from a car; both are possible but singular is more natural here. 'Nature views' should be 'natural views'. 'Different kinds of nature' is vague; 'different kinds of landscapes' is clearer. 'Nature level' is a typo for 'nature lover'. 'Different landscape of scenery' has incorrect noun forms and order; use 'different landscapes'. Suggestions: use correct noun forms and collocations, and correct typographical errors.

× Mountain and sea both of them I like it but if I have to choose one I always choose mountains because mountains are look good and I always enjoy to see mountains because there are so many nature. I am a nature lover so I like to prefer to go mountains.

✓ I like both the mountains and the sea, but if I have to choose, I always choose the mountains because they look beautiful and I always enjoy seeing them because there is so much nature. I am a nature lover, so I prefer to go to the mountains.

Multiple structure issues: 'Mountain and sea both of them I like it' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'I like both the mountains and the sea'. 'Mountains are look good' mixes forms; use 'they look beautiful' or 'the mountains look good'. 'Enjoy to see mountains' should be 'enjoy seeing the mountains' (verb + -ing). 'There are so many nature' is ungrammatical; say 'there is so much nature' or 'there is a lot of natural scenery'. 'Like to prefer to go mountains' is redundant and missing preposition; use 'prefer to go to the mountains'. Suggestions: simplify sentence structure, ensure correct verb forms (enjoy + -ing), use correct pronouns and prepositions, and avoid redundant words like 'like to prefer'.