Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid fillers (e.g., "uh"), and provide a clear topic sentence plus one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" correctly and correct grammar (e.g., "a more comfortable way").

예시: I prefer typing because it is a more comfortable and faster way to write messages. For example, when I need to contact friends or submit assignments, typing lets me edit quickly and send texts immediately.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and connect ideas with linking words like "because" and "so" more smoothly. Be specific about activities (e.g., essays, notes) and reduce redundancy ("every day" repeated).

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I study at a learning center and complete essays and notes on it. As a result, I am comfortable typing long documents and often use online resources while I work.

제안: Provide a clear time reference, use correct verb forms, avoid fragments, remove fillers, and structure the answer with a topic sentence plus brief supporting detail. Mention specific resources or a time period to be more precise.

예시: I learned to type a few years ago by watching YouTube tutorial videos and practising on my own. For example, I followed a beginner's typing course online and practised for 20–30 minutes each day.

제안: Give a more specific routine and use correct grammar (e.g., "this practice helps"). Avoid fillers and expand with details about methods or measurable progress. Use linking words like "by" or "so" to explain outcomes.

예시: I improve my typing by practising for about 30 minutes every day using typing tutor software and timed exercises. As a result, my speed has increased and I make fewer errors.

× I prefer typing because, uh, it's more comfortable way to write letter or message to someone or somewhere.

✓ I prefer typing because it is a more comfortable way to write a letter or a message to someone.

The sentence omits necessary articles: 'a more comfortable way' needs the indefinite article 'a', and 'letter' and 'message' need 'a' when singular and indefinite. Also remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'somewhere' for clarity. Use 'it is' instead of contraction to be more formal in speaking test context.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm studying at Learning Center and I use my laptop every day. So at Learning Center I write a lot of text or essay.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I am studying at the Learning Center and I use my laptop every day. At the Learning Center I write a lot of texts and essays.

Use definite article 'the' with named institutions: 'the Learning Center'. 'Text' and 'essay' should be plural when referring to multiple items: 'texts and essays'. Also avoid repeating 'every day' twice; repetition was left but sentence corrected for articles and plurals.

× I have learned. During watch it YouTube learning videos and uh, moreover, I learned by myself.

✓ I learned by watching YouTube tutorial videos, and I also learned by myself.

Use simple past 'learned' for a completed action. 'Have learned' is unnatural here; combine clauses: 'by watching YouTube tutorial videos' requires gerund form 'watching' after 'by'. 'It' is unnecessary. Replace 'uh' and 'moreover' with 'also' for smoother speech. Use 'tutorial videos' for clarity.

× I try to practice every day and uh, this practicing help me to improve my typing.

✓ I try to practice every day, and this practice helps me improve my typing.

Use the noun 'practice' instead of gerund 'practicing' as the subject, and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'practice helps' (adds -s for third person singular). Also omit 'to' before 'improve' after 'helps' (correct form: 'helps me improve'). Remove filler 'uh'.