Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос и давайте развёрнутый, но краткий ответ. Скажите предпочтение (typing или handwriting), затем добавьте одну-две причины и пример. Избегайте «I don't know» — это показывает непонимание вопроса.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can rearrange paragraphs quickly and use spell-check.

제안: Используйте корректную грамматику и стройте ответ по схеме: короткий прямой ответ + причина + уточняющий пример. Исправьте ошибки в артиклях и порядках слов (например, "I don't have a laptop"). Не повторяйте слова и избегайте лишних пауз.

예시: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because I don't own one. Instead, I often use my phone for messages and occasionally use a public library computer.

제안: Отвечайте чётко и говорите связно. Начните с простой темы: возраст и место обучения, затем разовьёте мысль с конкретными деталями. Следите за произношением и точностью слов (typing, primary school, touch-typing). Используйте связки (for example, after that, because) и не вставляйте неуместные фразы («assure a job», "Yeah, I could").

예시: I learned to type when I was about 10 at primary school during a basic computer class. We practiced touch-typing with regular exercises, and later I used online typing games at home to improve my speed.

제안: Давайте логичную структуру: сначала краткий ответ, затем 2–3 конкретных способа улучшения с примерами. Исправьте лексику (typing, programs, accuracy, finger placement, posture) и избегайте бессмысленных или нецензурных фраз. Употребляйте связки (for example, also, in addition) и говорите ясно о регулярности занятий.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing programs to increase speed and accuracy. I also work on correct finger placement and posture, and I do focused drills to reduce common mistakes.

× No, I don't know.

✓ No, I don't have a preference.

The original sentence is grammatically correct but does not answer the question. The examiner asked about preference; responding 'I don't know' is unclear. Use a sentence that directly addresses the question by stating lack of preference. Suggestion: use 'I don't have a preference' or 'I don't mind either'.

× No, because I I have not a keyboard and a laptop.

✓ No, because I don't have a keyboard or a laptop.

'Have not' is incorrect in modern conversational English; use the auxiliary 'do' in negative present simple: 'do not have'. Also remove the repeated 'I' and use 'or' to link items. Suggestion: 'I don't have a keyboard or a laptop.'

× I learned to tube on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old, a premier school.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old at primary school.

'Tube' is a typo for 'type'. 'Premier school' is incorrect collocation; use 'primary school'. Preposition 'at' is needed before the institution. Suggestion: proofread for typos and use 'learned to type' and 'at primary school'.

× During a basic computers class, we we practice touch tubing exercise.

✓ During a basic computers class, we practiced touch-typing exercises.

Tense should be past ('practiced') to match 'During' and the past time frame. 'Touch tubing' is a mistake for 'touch-typing'. Use plural 'exercises'. Remove duplicate 'we'. Suggestion: use past tense and correct term 'touch-typing'.

× Practicing like regularly at home with online games helped me improve speed and assure a job Yeah, I could.

✓ Practicing regularly at home with online games helped me improve my speed and secure a job.

Mix of present participle start with past result requires past 'helped'. Remove filler 'like' and correct collocation 'secure a job' rather than 'assure a job'. Add possessive 'my' before 'speed'. Remove informal 'Yeah, I could.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use appropriate collocations.

× I practice like irregularly using online tubing programs to build a speed and actually which helps reinforce muscle memory and radius errors.

✓ I practice irregularly using online typing programs to build speed, which actually helps reinforce muscle memory and reduce errors.

'Tubing' should be 'typing'. Placement of 'like' is informal and unnecessary. 'A speed' should be 'speed' without article. Use 'which helps' to refer to the practice; 'reduce errors' is correct collocation rather than 'radius errors'. Suggestion: remove filler words, correct nouns and use 'reduce' for errors.

× I also focus on proper finger plaques, semen and posture and occasionally occasionally don't carry the release for commonly stupid.

✓ I also focus on proper finger placement, hand position and posture, and occasionally practice commonly neglected keys.

The original contains multiple errors and inappropriate words: 'finger plaques' should be 'finger placement', 'semen' is an incorrect and inappropriate word—context likely 'hand position' or 'finger spacing'. Duplicate 'occasionally'. Phrase 'don't carry the release for commonly stupid' is incomprehensible; likely intended 'commonly neglected keys' or 'commonly mistyped keys'. Suggestion: use accurate vocabulary (finger placement, hand position), remove duplicates, and express the idea clearly.