Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer clearer and more natural by directly stating your preference, then give two concise, specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "illegible"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting when I'm working because my handwriting is often illegible for my patients. In addition, typing saves time and makes it easier to correct mistakes quickly, so it's more efficient for my job.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence (desktop or laptop), then add one or two clear, specific supporting details. Remove hesitations and fix grammar (e.g., "everyday" -> "every day", "trouble typing"). Use one linking word like "because" or "however".

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's the standard device used at my workplace. However, sometimes crumbs or wear cause keys to stick, which makes typing slow and frustrating.

제안: Start with a clear time reference (e.g., "in my twenties"), then briefly describe the context and one specific detail about learning. Correct grammar and avoid repetition.

예시: I learned to type in my twenties when my family bought our first computer. It was exciting and interesting, and we each spent hours practicing together to get comfortable with the keyboard.

제안: Answer directly how you improve typing now or in the past, giving specific methods (e.g., regular practice, online exercises, typing software) and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrases like "it happened effortlessly."

예시: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice; I spent time daily practicing typing exercises. Nowadays I use online typing programs and set aside 15 minutes a day to work on speed and accuracy.

× When I'm working, I prefer typing because my handwriting is not is eligible for my patients and the for saving the time and avoid the mistakes and fast correct mistakes, I prefer typing OK.

✓ When I'm working, I prefer typing because my handwriting is not legible for my patients, and typing saves time and helps me avoid mistakes and correct them quickly.

The sentence contains incorrect word choice and awkward adverb/adjective use. 'is eligible' is wrong; the correct adjective is 'legible' (meaning readable). 'for the saving the time' is ungrammatical — use 'saves time'. 'avoid the mistakes and fast correct mistakes' mixes verb forms; use 'helps me avoid mistakes and correct them quickly'. Also add a comma and conjunction to join clauses correctly. Improve by choosing correct adjectives/adverbs and restructuring the sentence for clarity.

× I use laptop keyboard, uh, on everyday practice uh, because in my, uh, work it's umm, usual practice and I write on a keyboard uh, sometimes the keyboard case are uh, stacked and I have uh, trouble to typing, but uh, I uh.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard in my everyday practice because at work it is the usual practice and I type on a keyboard. Sometimes the keys are stuck and I have trouble typing.

Errors include missing article: 'laptop keyboard' should be 'a laptop keyboard'. 'on everyday practice' should be 'in my everyday practice' (correct preposition and possessive). 'it's umm, usual practice' needs the article 'the' or 'the usual practice' — here 'the usual practice' is clearer. 'write on a keyboard' is better as 'type on a keyboard'. 'keyboard case are stacked' is incorrect; likely 'keys are stuck' (wrong noun and verb agreement). 'trouble to typing' should be 'trouble typing' (infinitive misuse). Suggestions: add necessary articles, correct prepositions, use 'type' for keyboard activity, and correct noun choice and verb forms.

× First time I used the keyboard it was when I had my 20s when we bought the first computer in our family and it was very excited it it was very interesting and we all family members had our hours for practicing on the keyboard.

✓ The first time I used a keyboard was when I was in my twenties, when we bought the first computer in our family. It was very exciting and interesting, and all family members spent hours practicing on the keyboard.

Tense and article errors: 'First time I used the keyboard it was when I had my 20s' should be 'The first time I used a keyboard was when I was in my twenties' — use 'the' and 'a keyboard', and the correct expression 'in my twenties'. 'it was very excited' incorrectly uses an adjective; 'excited' describes a person, 'exciting' describes an experience, so use 'it was very exciting'. 'we all family members had our hours for practicing' is awkward; use 'all family members spent hours practicing'. Suggestions: use correct past tense forms, proper articles, and correct adjective ('exciting') and clearer phrasing.

× I did not force my practice in my 20s, twenties because it happened. It happened effortlessly. By practicing and practicing.

✓ I did not force myself to practice in my twenties because learning happened effortlessly through regular practice.

Problems: 'did not force my practice' is unnatural — use 'did not force myself to practice'. 'in my 20s, twenties' is redundant; use 'in my twenties'. Fragment 'By practicing and practicing' is incomplete; integrate it into the sentence: 'through regular practice'. Also combine sentences for fluency. Suggestion: use reflexive pronoun with 'force', correct age expression, and avoid sentence fragments by completing ideas.