Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문장을 보다 자연스럽고 간결하게 만드세요. 주제문을 먼저 말하고, 이유를 1–2개만 명확히 제시하세요. 불필요한 반복과 문법 오류(예: 'I can do focus', 'very slow typing person')를 고치고 연결어(for example, because)를 적절히 사용하세요.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate better than typing. For example, when I take notes by hand I remember information more easily, and because I'm a slow typist, handwriting is simply faster for me.

제안: 문장을 더 명확하게 재구성하세요. 무엇을 타이핑하는지(essays, notes 등)와 어떤 기기를 주로 사용하는지(desktop 또는 laptop)를 분명히 말하세요. 문법 오류('study by note notebook')와 어순을 고치고 연결어로 이유를 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

예시: I usually type every day on a laptop because I use it to write notes and essays for my studies. As I frequently type on a laptop, I'm more familiar with its keyboard than with a desktop.

제안: 시제를 맞추고 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요. 'from in' 같은 불필요한 전치사를 제거하고, 과거 경험을 설명할 때 과거형을 일관되게 사용하세요. 또한 왜 노력했는지 구체적인 이유(시험 준비 등)를 명확히 하세요.

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. At that time we had a typing test, so I practiced a lot to improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: 문장을 간결하고 정확한 시제로 고치세요. 주어와 소유격('our') 일치도를 확인하고, 방법을 구체적으로 제시하세요(예: 연습하는 구체적 방법, 시간, 온라인 도구). 연결어로 순서와 이유를 명확히 하세요.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day, usually for 20–30 minutes. For example, I use online typing exercises and focus on accuracy first, then gradually increase my speed.

× I prefer handwriting because.

✓ I prefer handwriting.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary because, creating a sentence fragment. Remove because to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: do not leave subordinating conjunctions (because) without a main clause.

× I can do focus when I do handwriting rather than typing.

✓ I can focus better when I handwrite rather than type.

Use the verb focus without do (incorrect auxiliary). Also use adverb better to express comparative improvement and use handwrite/type as verbs. Suggestion: use natural verb forms (focus, handwrite, type) and place adverbs (better) after the verb.

× Also I'm very slow typing person so I prefer handwriting.

✓ Also, I'm a very slow typist, so I prefer handwriting.

"Slow typing person" is unnatural; use the noun typist or adjective phrase "slow at typing." Add the article a before the noun and a comma before coordinating conjunction so. Suggestion: use appropriate noun forms and include articles where needed.

× I usually type on keyboard every day because I study by note notebook so I'm more familiar with keyboard.

✓ I usually type on a keyboard every day because I study with a notebook, so I'm more familiar with the keyboard.

Prepositions were incorrect: use on a keyboard, study with a notebook. Include articles (a, the) before singular nouns. Suggestion: use common collocations (type on a keyboard, study with a notebook) and include articles.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard from in a primary school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in primary school.

Remove incorrect prepositions from/in together; use simply in primary school. Also article 'a' is usually omitted before 'primary school' in this context. Suggestion: use the correct single preposition and omit unnecessary articles.

× That time we have exam on that so I was really try hard to learn type.

✓ At that time we had an exam on it, so I really tried hard to learn to type.

Tense and agreement errors: use past tense had and tried. Use article an before exam, replace 'on that' with 'on it' or omit. Use infinitive 'to learn to type.' Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense and use correct verb forms (tried, learn to type).

× I think using every day it makes me improve our typing skills, so before I being faster I always try hard to practice every day.

✓ I think using it every day helps me improve my typing skills, so before I became faster I always tried hard and practiced every day.

Multiple issues: 'using every day it' word order wrong; use 'using it every day.' 'Makes me improve' is unnatural; use helps me improve. Pronoun our should be my. Tense consistency: use past tense for 'before I became faster' and 'always tried/practiced.' 'Being faster' is incorrect form here. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent, use correct verb patterns (help + base form), and maintain tense consistency.