Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сфокусируйтесь на более естественной структуре ответа: начните с чётного утверждения, затем добавьте два конкретных аргумента с связками и закончите кратким выводом. Избегайте повторов (например, "typing is fast, faster than handwriting") и грамматических ошибок (уберите лишние артикли и исправьте порядок слов).

예시: I prefer typing because it's generally faster and more comfortable than handwriting. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can keep up with a fast lecture, and I find editing is much easier on a screen. For these reasons, typing suits my study style better.

제안: Дайте более чёткую причину и уберите разговорные фразы вроде "or something like that". Свяжите предложение союзами (for example, because, so) и добавьте конкретный пример использования, чтобы показать релевантность ответа.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it to study and prepare for exams. For example, I write practice essays and take digital notes, which makes it easier to organize and revise my work quickly.

제안: Избегайте неуверенных оборотов и лишних подробностей. Сформулируйте ответ прямо, используйте точные временные выражения и конкретные примеры. Исправьте ошибки в последовательности слов и уберите лишние вставки (например, "or watching something").

예시: I don't remember the exact date, but I started learning to type when I was about six years old. My parents bought me a phone when I was five, so I became familiar with typing and swiping on the screen, which helped me learn keyboard skills soon after.

제안: Будьте более конкретны о методах улучшения: укажите регулярность, конкретные упражнения или ресурсы. Используйте связки (however, therefore, for example) и избегайте повторов (например, "writing an essay" дважды).

예시: I improve my typing mainly by practising regularly: I write essays and take online typing lessons a few times a week. For example, I use a typing website to practice accuracy and also time myself when I write essays to increase my speed.

× I prefer typing. In my opinion typing is more effective.

✓ I prefer typing. In my opinion, typing is more effective.

Add a comma after introductory phrase 'In my opinion' for correct punctuation; not a grammatical article issue but improves clarity. Use consistent spacing and commas.

× The reason is that usually typing is fast, faster than handwriting and handwriting is might feel uncomfortable while typing is enjoyable for me.

✓ The reason is that, usually, typing is faster than handwriting, and handwriting might feel uncomfortable while typing is enjoyable for me.

Remove redundant words and correct word order: 'is fast, faster than handwriting' should be 'is faster than handwriting'. Place commas around 'usually'. Remove extra 'is' before 'might'. Ensure parallel structure in the clause contrasting handwriting and typing.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. 'On' is the correct preposition for using a keyboard.

× The reason is that I prepare to my future exams and in my opinion typing on a keyboard is more convenient than writing on a paper or something like that.

✓ The reason is that I am preparing for my future exams, and in my opinion typing on a keyboard is more convenient than writing on paper.

Use 'prepare for' rather than 'prepare to'. Use present continuous 'am preparing' for current plan. Use 'writing on paper' (no article) not 'on a paper'. Remove unnecessary filler 'or something like that' for clarity.

× So yes.

✓ So, yes.

Add a comma for slight pause; acceptable short answer. No major grammar error.

× I don't remember the actual time when I started typing on a keyboard, but in I think I was around six years old.

✓ I don't remember the exact time when I started typing on a keyboard, but I think I was around six years old.

Remove extraneous word 'in' before 'I think' and use 'exact' instead of 'actual' for natural phrasing. Tense 'started' is correct past tense.

× The reason is that my parents bought me a phone when I was 5 and I started learning how to type and swipe or watching something.

✓ The reason is that my parents bought me a phone when I was five, and I started learning how to type and swipe and watch things.

Write numbers under ten in words ('five'). Use parallel gerunds: 'type, swipe and watch' instead of mixing forms 'to type and swipe or watching'. Use 'things' instead of vague 'something'.

× I don't usually try to improve my typing skills.

✓ I don't usually try to improve my typing skills.

Sentence is correct. Present simple negative with 'usually' is appropriate.

× However, I write an essay on my laptop keyboard, so I write quite a lot.

✓ However, I write essays on my laptop keyboard, so I write quite a lot.

Use plural 'essays' to match general habit rather than singular 'an essay'. This makes meaning clear that writing is a regular activity.

× That's why I improve my typing skills by writing an essay.

✓ That's why I improve my typing skills by writing essays.

Use plural 'essays' to indicate a habitual action. Present simple 'improve' is acceptable to describe a general truth; keep tense consistent.