Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 構造を明確にし、文法の誤りを直してください。まず主題文で好みをはっきり述べ、その後1〜2文で理由を具体的に説明します。主な改善点は：代名詞の誤用（"him"→"handwriting"）、時制と完了形の整合、冠詞や前置詞の修正、冗長さの削減です。例として、日記を書く頻度や紙に書くことで得られる具体的な効果（記憶、自己反省、感情整理）を一つか二つ挙げると説得力が増します。

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing. I have kept a diary since I was a child, so writing by hand helps me reflect on my thoughts more deeply. For example, when I write on paper I remember events better and feel calmer afterwards.

제안: 答えを簡潔にし、文法と時制を整えてください。否定の後に理由を添える際は、現在の習慣を表す現在形を使い、曖昧な表現は具体化します。"didn't type anything"は過去形で誤解を招くため現在形に直すべきです。短く1〜2文で理由と感情を述べると自然です。

예시: No, I don't type every day. As a secondary school student I usually write most things by hand, and I prefer it because it helps me concentrate.

제안: 文を整理して時制と語順を修正してください。背景を説明する時は時制を一貫させ、不要な繰り返し（"take and took"、"retake the lesson again"）を避けます。具体的な年齢や学年を示すとさらに良いです。また、因果関係を示す接続詞（because, so, therefore）を適切に使って論理を明確にしてください。

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school because we had computer lessons that included a typing exam. If students failed the test, they had to retake the class, so everyone practised a lot and gradually improved.

제안: 時制と語順を整理し、具体的な方法をより明確に述べてください。例えば練習の頻度、使っているサイト名や練習形式（タイムトライアル、エラーのフィードバックなど）、進歩を測る方法（正確さや語数）を示すと説得力が増します。また過去と未来の混在を避け、一貫した時制で話してください。

예시: I improve my typing by practising every day on online typing websites. I usually do short timed tests for 15 minutes and track my accuracy and words per minute, so I can see steady improvement.

× I prefer him writing more because I'm a person who have written a diary since I was young in my notebook because I think I can reflect myself more if I am writing on the paper rather than typing on the computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I have written a diary in my notebook since I was young, and I think I can reflect more when I write on paper rather than type on a computer.

The sentence incorrectly uses the pronoun 'him' before 'writing'; choose the noun 'handwriting' or 'writing by hand'. 'Have' should be 'have written' requires agreement with 'I' and the present perfect is correct; improve word order and remove redundant 'because'. Use 'reflect more' rather than 'reflect myself more'. Use 'when I write' (simple present for general truth) and 'type on a computer' is more natural. Suggestions: replace 'him writing' with 'handwriting' or 'writing by hand', use present perfect 'have written', and simplify the sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:12

× No, since I am a secondary school student I didn't type anything. I almost write everything on the paper instead of typing and I like.

✓ No, as a secondary school student I don't type much. I write almost everything on paper instead of typing, and I like it.

The original mixes past and present tenses incorrectly: 'since I am a secondary school student' indicates a present state, so use present tense 'don't type' not past 'didn't'. 'Almost write' should be 'write almost everything'; add 'it' after 'I like'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent (present simple) and correct word order and missing object. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school because we had a COM computer lessons we need to type and take and took the exam.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school because we had computer lessons where we needed to type and take an exam.

Awkward structure: 'COM computer lessons' is unclear and redundant; use 'computer lessons'. Mixed tenses 'need to type and take and took the exam' should be unified: 'needed to type and take an exam'. Use 'learned to type' not 'learned how to type' (both acceptable) and 'where' to introduce the clause about lessons. Suggestions: simplify to 'computer lessons where we needed to type and take an exam.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× If you didn't pass, you need to retake the lesson again.

✓ If you didn't pass, you needed to retake the lesson.

Mixed conditional/time reference: the clause starts with past 'didn't pass', so the result should be past 'needed' rather than present 'need'. Also 'retake' with 'again' is redundant; drop 'again'. Suggestions: match tenses in conditional sentence and remove redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So everyone was really focused on how to type and we get these skills.

✓ So everyone was really focused on learning to type and we got those skills.

Tenses are inconsistent: the sentence starts in past 'was focused' so use past 'got' not present 'get'. 'How to type' is acceptable but 'learning to type' is more natural. Use 'those skills' to refer back to previously mentioned skills. Suggestions: keep past tense and use natural collocations. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I improve my typing by practicing everyday and I will look for a website which help me can practice my typing in a limited time and I also saw my improvements so I was happy about that.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day. I look for websites that help me practice typing within a time limit, and I have seen my improvements, so I was happy about that.

Use 'practicing' after 'by' is correct. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'I will look' changes tense awkwardly; keep present simple 'I look' for habitual action or use 'I looked' if past. 'Which help me can practice' is incorrect: use 'that help me practice' (no modal). 'In a limited time' is better as 'within a time limit'. 'I also saw my improvements' should be present perfect 'I have seen' when referring to effects up to now; if describing past, use 'saw' and keep consistency. Suggestions: correct 'every day', use 'that help me practice', and maintain consistent tense. Grammar problem type ID:8