Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ был понятен, но содержит много ошибок грамматики, повторов и неподходящих слов. Сосредоточьтесь на кратком тематическом предложении, избегайте повторов (например, «it's it's») и используйте правильные формы (typing/handwriting, essays, reports, take a quick note). Добавьте связующее слово для плавного перехода к детали (for example / however). Практикуйте произношение ключевых слов и поставьте ударение на противопоставлении преимуществ печати и письма вручную.

예시: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for long documents such as essays and reports. However, I usually handwrite during exams or when I need to take a quick note because it feels quicker and more reliable in that setting.

제안: Ответ запутан, содержит грамматические ошибки и лишние фразы, не даёт прямого, связного ответа. Начинайте с чёткого тематического предложения (I usually type on a desktop / laptop), затем добавляйте одну-две конкретные причины с связующими словами (because, so). Избегайте повторов и ненужных фрагментов (I am students). Тренируйте простые фразы для объяснения привычек и комфорта.

예시: I usually type on a desktop at home because I find the full-size keyboard and ergonomic setup more comfortable for long periods. I do handwrite during exams when laptops are not allowed.

제안: Ответ понятен по смыслу, но содержит много пауз, неверные слова и нет чёткого временного маркера. Используйте простую структуру: укажите время (when), объясните кратко, как это произошло, используя связки (because, so, since). Замените неверные слова (Typhoon → type on, informatic → IT specialist) и избегайте эх (uh). Практикуйте связные короткие предложения с правильной лексикой.

예시: I learned to type when I was a child because my mother worked in IT. I used to play computer games with my brother, and that helped me get familiar with the keyboard from an early age.

제안: Ответ содержит повторы, временные несоответствия и непонятные фразы (lose speed and confidence). Сформулируйте чётко: опишите методы улучшения (daily practice, typing software, games) и укажите результат или прогресс. Используйте связующие слова (for example, since, because) и корректные формы глаголов (started, help). Тренируйте говорить о методах и результатах кратко и логично.

예시: I improve my typing by practising on my computer every day, often using online typing programs and games. I started focusing on accuracy around age ten, and regular practice has significantly increased my speed and confidence.

× Hyperbole typing because it's it's faster and more convenient for long documents such as essay and the reports.

✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for long documents such as essays and reports.

The noun forms are incorrect: 'essay' should be plural 'essays' when speaking generally; 'the reports' should be 'reports' without 'the' for general reference. Also 'Hyperbole' is likely a misused word; 'I prefer' is correct. Use plural nouns for general categories. Suggestions: use plural for general countable nouns (essays, reports); omit unnecessary articles for generalizations.

× I usually type at home or at work, but I handwrites during exams or when I need to take a quick notice.

✓ I usually type at home or at work, but I handwrite during exams or when I need to take a quick note.

Pronoun/verb agreement and word choice errors: 'handwrites' is incorrect for first person; the correct verb form is 'handwrite'. 'quick notice' is incorrect collocation; use 'quick note'. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with subject (I handwrite), and use natural collocations (take a quick note).

× I type on a desktop because I use hands writing.

✓ I type on a desktop because I use handwriting.

The phrase 'use hands writing' is ungrammatical. Use the noun 'handwriting' to refer to the act/style of writing by hand. Suggestions: replace awkward literal phrases with the correct noun form 'handwriting'.

× I am students.

✓ I am a student.

Number agreement and article missing: 'students' is plural while the speaker is singular; use 'a student' to indicate one person. Suggestions: ensure subject complement matches number and include the indefinite article for singular countable nouns.

× I use handwriting during exams already to take quick notice.

✓ I already use handwriting during exams to take quick notes.

Word order and collocation are awkward: 'already' should precede the main verb or follow subject; 'quick notice' is incorrect—use 'quick notes' and plural when referring to general practice. Suggestions: place adverbs in standard positions and use correct noun phrases (quick notes).

× Also to type on a desktop. It is so so comfortable or.

✓ Also, I prefer to type on a desktop; it is very comfortable.

Fragment and filler words: the original contains sentence fragments and repeated filler 'so so' and stray 'or'. Combine into a complete sentence and use 'very' instead of 'so so' for clarity. Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments and unnecessary fillers; use complete sentences.

× I know how to use Typhoon like, uh, keyboard, uh, my mother works, uh, as an informatic and I could play, uh, computer games, uh, as a child.

✓ I learned how to use a keyboard when I was a child; my mother worked as an IT specialist and I could play computer games with her and my brother.

Tense inconsistency and word choice: 'know' should be past 'learned' when referring to how it began; 'works' should be past 'worked' for past context; 'informatic' is incorrect—use 'IT specialist' or 'computer scientist'. Suggestions: maintain past tense for childhood events and use correct job terminology.

× And I play computer games with my brother and I, uh, learn how to type.

✓ I played computer games with my brother and learned how to type.

Verb tense and pronoun order: use past tense 'played' and 'learned' for past events; pronoun order should be 'my brother and I' only in subject position, but when listing verbs it's clearer to write 'I played with my brother and learned...'. Suggestions: keep verbs in the same past tense and use correct pronoun order.

× I I have a computer and I improve my typing every day and I think I starts to improve my typing at about 10 years old and the practicing game helped me to lose speed and confidence it when I typing.

✓ I have a computer and I improve my typing every day. I think I started to improve my typing at about ten years old, and the practice games helped me increase my speed and confidence when I was typing.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'I starts' should be 'I started' (past tense); 'practicing game' should be 'practice games'; 'helped me to lose speed and confidence' is opposite intended meaning—use 'increase' or 'gain' speed and confidence; 'when I typing' needs past continuous 'when I was typing'. Suggestions: use consistent tenses, correct verb forms, and choose verbs that match intended meaning (increase/gain rather than lose).