Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 응답을 더 자연스럽고 단정적으로 만들고 중복 표현과 말더듬(uh, well)을 줄이세요. 주제문(선호)을 먼저 확실히 말한 다음 한두 개의 구체적 이유를 간결한 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어 ‘useful and comfortable’ 대신 구체적 이유(빠름, 편리한 편집 등)를 제시하면 좋습니다.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes editing easy. For example, I can quickly delete or move sentences and use spellcheck, which saves me time when doing homework.

제안: 문법(어순, 시제, 단어형태)을 바로잡고 중복 표현을 줄이세요. ‘use typing with laptop’ 대신 자연스러운 표현을 쓰고 이유는 한두 가지 구체적으로 설명하세요. 또한 과거형 오류(used laptop) 피하세요.

예시: Yes, I usually type on a laptop because it is lightweight and portable. I can take it to class or move around the house easily, which makes studying more convenient.

제안: 질문을 직접적으로 답하세요(언제 배웠는지). 현재 상황 설명으로 혼동하지 말고, 간단한 연도나 나이, 시기를 제시하세요. 문장은 완결되게 만들고 불필요한 감탄사(so cool) 대신 구체적 사실을 말하세요.

예시: I learned to type when I was about ten years old at school. Since then I have practised regularly while doing homework on my laptop, which helped me improve.

제안: 질문의 의도(타자 실력 향상 방법)를 직접적으로 설명하세요. 불완전한 문장과 모호한 표현을 고치고, 구체적인 연습 방법(온라인 연습, 속도 연습, 타자 게임 등)과 주기성을 제시하세요.

예시: To improve my typing, I practise with online typing exercises every day for about twenty minutes. I also focus on accuracy first, then increase speed by timing myself and repeating difficult words.

× I prefer, well, uh, typing, because typing is very useful and comfortable for me.

✓ I prefer typing because it is very useful and comfortable for me.

The sentence overuses fillers and includes a comma splice; use simple present tense 'prefer' and refer to 'typing' with a pronoun 'it'. This keeps subject-verb agreement and present tense consistency. Remove unnecessary fillers and commas for clarity.

× So when I do homework, I use typing.

✓ So when I do homework, I type.

Use the verb 'type' in simple present rather than the noun phrase 'use typing'. 'Use typing' is unnatural and redundant; 'I type' is concise and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I usually use typing with laptop because laptop is so comfortable and very light so I love used laptop.

✓ Yes, I usually type on my laptop because it is comfortable and very light, so I love using it.

Preposition 'on' is required with 'type' for devices. 'Laptop' needs a determiner ('my'). 'Used laptop' is incorrect: use present participle 'using' for ongoing preference. Maintain present tense and correct pronoun 'it'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ (No correction needed)

This examiner question is grammatically correct and requires no change.

× When I do homework on my laptop, I. Use this. On twice a week so it's so cool for me.

✓ I do homework on my laptop about twice a week, so it is very convenient for me.

Original has fragments and incorrect word order. Combine fragments into one sentence, use 'about twice a week' to indicate frequency, and replace 'it's so cool' with 'very convenient' to match context and formality.

× How do you improve your typing?

✓ (No correction needed)

This examiner question is grammatically correct and needs no change.

× To be frank is very interesting question because what I was younger than now I don't type well because my finger is so.

✓ To be frank, that's a very interesting question. When I was younger, I didn't type well because my fingers were not very coordinated.

The original contains fragments, tense confusion, and incomplete clause. Use 'To be frank, that's a very interesting question.' then correct past tense 'was' to 'was younger' phrase and 'didn't type' for past ability. 'Finger is so' is incomplete; specify 'my fingers were not very coordinated.'